The mess

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Just look at the mess. You cherubs will be the death of me – or someone else if they trip on those toys you’ve abandoned everywhere. I mean, dying once is unfortunate enough, but falling down the steps and doing it again is simply not fair.

They’ve made it all the way along the path to eternity and through the narrow gate only to stumble on the stairway to heaven which you’ve littered with Bangel dolls and springy things.

Now let’s get this place cleared up before the Boss sees it.

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* No, that wasn’t me in the audio! I’m no good at angelic voices so got Suno to create  an AI version for me!

Thanks to Sadje for hosting What Do You See?/

Image Credit; Sebastian Knoll @ Unsplash

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3 thoughts on “The mess

  1. Denise's avatar Denise April 20, 2026 / 13:40

    The fact that there is a stairway to heaven and a highway to hell should tell you all you need to know about the traffic.

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje April 20, 2026 / 14:04

    Loved the poem and the musical version of it. Thanks so much Keith.

  3. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall April 20, 2026 / 14:40

    Just brilliant, Keith!

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