Rude awakenings

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For many, the next year was better than the last, but not for him.

As a baby he was the centre of attention, or so it seemed. 

And then he became the coolest kid on the block, but not for long.

When he reached his teens he thought he was the life and soul of the party. He couldn’t have been more wrong.

Years later he reckoned the world owed him a living, but he soon found out it didn’t.

When he felt it was time to settle down he thought he’d have a queue of brides waiting at his door, but there wasn’t. 

When he eventually wed he thought marriage would be easy. How wrong could he have been.‘.

Forever the optimist, he faces the future full of hope and lofty aspirations. Next year will be better than the last…

…or is he heading for more rude awakenings?


Thanks to Sadje for hosting What Do You See?

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28 thoughts on “Rude awakenings

  1. Vero's avatar Vero March 23, 2026 / 12:53

    One never knows what’s around the next bend in the river of life.

  2. Dale's avatar Dale March 23, 2026 / 13:36

    I guess if his perception of himself keeps him content and positive, then he shall never suffer depression!

      • Dale's avatar Dale March 24, 2026 / 18:15

        This is true!

  3. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin March 23, 2026 / 13:37

    Profound and relatable story, Keith. Great perspective on the prompts.

  4. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander March 23, 2026 / 13:44

    Keith, I find myself drawn to that closing turn, “Next year will be better than the last…”, because it feels both hopeful and a little uneasy at the same time 🙂

    Much love,
    David

  5. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall March 23, 2026 / 15:17

    Aha, good take, Keith.

  6. beth's avatar beth March 23, 2026 / 17:25

    well said, Keith

  7. J.S. Pailly's avatar J.S. Pailly March 23, 2026 / 18:19

    Relatable. Maybe a little too relatable.

  8. clark's avatar clark March 23, 2026 / 18:47

    imo depends on whether he gets addicted to disappointment (or, to be more accurate blaming others for the letdown) otherwise… who was the character in Candide* who totally knew things would work out for the best?

    *Full Disclosure: haven’t re-read since high school… given all things, the cognitive dissonance might be a bit too much lol

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 27, 2026 / 17:51

      A good point, Clark.

      I’ve not read if for years either. Now I’m wondering!

  9. Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬'s avatar Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬ March 23, 2026 / 21:10

    I absolutely love this, dear Keith, and the disappointed tone in your voice is brilliant.

  10. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings March 24, 2026 / 00:53

    Nice use of the prompts. I hope he sees he’s taking himself into the future with him.

  11. Sadje's avatar Sadje March 24, 2026 / 11:34

    At least he never lost his optimism. A nice way to use both images in your story Keith. Thanks for joining in.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 27, 2026 / 17:53

      A half glass full kinda guy!

      Thanks for the prompts, Sadje

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje March 27, 2026 / 18:21

        It’s my pleasure dear friend

  12. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz March 24, 2026 / 15:01

    It never hurts to be an optimist- maybe if your vision is stuck in the past….

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