Wierdle!

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I enjoyed life, I can’t deny it but I had no idea how much fun things would be when I left it behind and changed from a load of worn out flesh and bones into something resembling a puff of smoke!

When they dumped my worn out body in that grave yard, or the human scrap yard as I call it, I rose within seconds and became the ghost I am today, there was no way I’d settle for becoming nothing more than a messy rotting pile of manure feeding weeds!

Little did you you know, but I was there at my wake – awake at my wake you could say! I was looking forward to hearing what they actually thought of me. 

I watched my mate step onto the podium and start saying some really sweet things.  I knew he was exaggerating, I wasn’t really as nice as he made out, but hey-ho! He said I  had a wicked sense of humour so I though I’d edge up behind him and tickle his neck! He started to scratch, tremble and splutter, they all thought he was overcome with emotion!

They decided it was time to dance and played one of my favourite songs, Gimme Shelter by The Stones. I was in amongst you, dancing too.  He may be gone but ole fella still rocks onl

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Thanks to Brenda Warren for hosting The Sunday Whirl where this week’s given words are –

shelter settle rose rocks edge step messy flesh left ghost scrap and tremble

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20 thoughts on “Wierdle!

  1. Ange's avatar Ange March 1, 2026 / 12:43

    I love this Keith – especially your ‘ghostly’ voice I am so glad the old guy is still rocking 🤘😅

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 1, 2026 / 15:24

      Thanks, Ange, it took me several goes so I’m pleased it was worth it!

  2. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz March 1, 2026 / 13:11

    I wanna be a ghost! Love the voice over!

  3. mysteriam's avatar mysteriam March 1, 2026 / 13:52

    that was great fun, thanks! I wouldn’t usually click on the ‘play’ button, preferring to read things myself, but I’m glad I did – hearing the story read in your own voice really gave it something extra!

  4. Dale's avatar Dale March 1, 2026 / 17:51

    Love it, Keith. Wouldn`t it be grand to be there at our own wake? Assuming we are well-remembered, that is…

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 2, 2026 / 15:31

      It’s something I’ve often thought about! Cheers, Dale.

      • Dale's avatar Dale March 2, 2026 / 15:44

        Why am I not surprised?

  5. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings March 1, 2026 / 20:59

    It would be nice to know what people will say about us, I suppose. Then again, you know what they say about eavesdroppers!

  6. beth's avatar beth March 2, 2026 / 03:26

    way to go!!! and I love that song too –

  7. Sadje's avatar Sadje March 6, 2026 / 17:14

    It would a nice experience to attend one’s own funeral.

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