19 thoughts on “Flash fiction!

  1. Denise Hammond's avatar Denise Hammond February 23, 2026 / 13:04

    Very well written. My home has been hit by lightning three times! Good thing I have insurance. Garage door unit, AC unit and TV all fried.

  2. Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬'s avatar Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬ February 23, 2026 / 13:29

    Excellent piece of writing, dear Keith. I felt like I was sitting right there next to you. ⚡️

  3. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall February 23, 2026 / 14:08

    Dramatic indeed! Good one, Keith.

  4. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz February 23, 2026 / 14:50

    What a gorgeous piece of writing! And the perfect dramatic reading I might add.

  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje February 23, 2026 / 16:11

    Very emotive piece Keith. You’ve described the scene so vividly. Thanks for joining in

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 24, 2026 / 18:01

      Thanks Sadje, that wonderful picture set off sparks in my mind!

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje February 25, 2026 / 00:52

        Thank you so much 😊

  6. Dale's avatar Dale February 23, 2026 / 19:45

    I love this! As much as I love sudden thunderstorms in the summer. Wonderfully done, Sir!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 24, 2026 / 17:50

      There’s nothing like a summer storm! Thanks so much, Dale.

      • Dale's avatar Dale February 24, 2026 / 23:42

        Indeed! My pleasure!

  7. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings February 24, 2026 / 01:23

    Wonderfully told! I could feel it coming, as you do when a storm is moving in.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 24, 2026 / 17:58

      I’m pleased that came across, thank you so much, Mimi.

  8. Suzana's avatar Suzana February 25, 2026 / 06:53

    Thank you for such a beautiful trip!
    Indeed, the sky is awesome!
    Happy WW and a fine week!

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