Friday on a Wednesday!

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He had often walked down this street before. He’d watch from behind a lilac tree hoping any that second she’d suddenly appear. He had an overpowering feeling, knowing that somehow she was near. There was nowhere else he’d rather be than the street where she lived.

People watched and stared, but it didn’t bother bother him. It bothered her though. She could no longer let the time go by.

Constable Clutch grabbed him by the arm. “Let go officer”, he said.

“No, Zee Parker. You are under arrest for violation of the Stalking and Harassment Act 1997, anything you say…”

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*Any similarity to a certain well known song is purely coincidental!

Click the cop to visit the squares!

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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers

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PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart.

36 thoughts on “Friday on a Wednesday!

  1. Neil MacDonald's avatar Neil MacDonald February 11, 2026 / 16:21

    I like this very much, Keith. An insight into an obsessive personality

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 11, 2026 / 16:50

      Indeed, but a bit different from the character that inspired my tale! Thanks, Neil.

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje February 11, 2026 / 16:28

    Oops! That is not good 😅

  3. Dale's avatar Dale February 11, 2026 / 16:39

    I don’t usually read any before writing but I am glad I did because I was going down the same road! Time to rewrite 😉

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 11, 2026 / 16:49

      Oh dear, sorry about that – I feel guilty now!

      • Dale's avatar Dale February 11, 2026 / 17:29

        No, don’t! I wasn’t sure about it anyway as it was kind of “date like” and I did that last week! You just gave me the nudge to get more creative 😉

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 11, 2026 / 17:33

        That’s all right then!!!
        Can’t wait to see what you come up with!

  4. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin February 11, 2026 / 20:07

    I am always impressed with the depth of your stories to these (to me) challenging photo prompts. Well done Keith.

      • Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin February 14, 2026 / 15:21

        You are very welcome, Keith!

  5. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li February 11, 2026 / 20:10

    I thought for a second that the constable was her and that he would be in bliss 🙂 I’m glad someone interrupted that trajectory.

  6. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff February 11, 2026 / 20:42

    Dear Keith,

    My mind didn’t go to Freddy Einsford-Hill. Not I. Not much. 😉
    This guy better mind where he walks. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2026 / 14:39

      Haha, Freddy Einsford-Hill, what a character that was!

  7. Ange's avatar Ange February 11, 2026 / 21:30

    Great write Keith love the songs implanted in there 🙌

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2026 / 14:40

      Thanks, Ange, I thought it would make a change!

  8. beth's avatar beth February 12, 2026 / 02:11

    crossing that line –

  9. Unknown's avatar Anonymous February 12, 2026 / 02:20

    Great story, Kieth.

  10. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz February 12, 2026 / 15:58

    I cannot find it in my heart to feel sorry for him….

  11. ceayr's avatar ceayr February 12, 2026 / 20:29

    Wonderfully awful as always, my fair gentleman

  12. Unknown's avatar Anonymous February 13, 2026 / 21:42

    I think stalking is a mental condition that can be cured by immersion in freezing water, permanently.

  13. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts February 14, 2026 / 23:16

    I thought of the song right away. Love that! Entertaining tale as always, Keith, though a little creepy. 🙂

  14. Inside the Mind of Isadora's avatar Inside the Mind of Isadora February 17, 2026 / 19:57

    I’m not a surprised she was feeling a bit creepy.
    An unusual take on the prompt, Neil.

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