99 words

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Ping was trudging home from work in the pouring rain. She hated rain.

As she flew through the door her boyfriend Pong couldn’t contain his amusement as she slung her sodden coat to the floor and headed for her ‘medicine cupboard’ for a glass of vino.

He went to cuddle her but she pushed him away. “You need a hug from your best friend”, he said. 

“Diamonds are a girl’s best friend”, she huffed, “which reminds me, how much longer…” 

Pong dropped to one knee, in his hand a  little black box. 

“Ping, will you do me the honour…….”  

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Ping Ping to see the squares!

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PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart

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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers

39 thoughts on “99 words”

  1. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander October 22, 2025 / 12:11

    Such a sweet twist at the end 💍 — I really felt Ping’s mood shift from stormy to shining.

    Much love,
    David

  2. beth's avatar beth October 22, 2025 / 12:15

    <3

  3. Sandra's avatar Sandra October 22, 2025 / 12:28

    Pong likes to choose his moment, I guess.

  4. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff October 22, 2025 / 12:46

    Dear Keith,

    Timing is everything, isn’t it? I hope Pong hasn’t waited too long. Cute story with a certain ring to it. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  5. Denarii Peters's avatar Denarii Peters October 22, 2025 / 13:32

    What a sweet story! Just shows you there can be diamonds in the rain as well as a silver lining to the clouds.

  6. Anita's avatar Anita October 22, 2025 / 14:03

    Romantic story on a rainy night!

    And Ping-Pong lived happily ever after 🙂

  7. destiny's avatar destiny October 22, 2025 / 15:08

    between a Ping and a Pong…i hope he asked the correct question 😬lol…

  8. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz October 22, 2025 / 16:02

    Ping just learned when to shut her mouth! hehehehe

  9. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li October 22, 2025 / 19:00

    Oh that could have gone a lot differently. I wish them the best.

      • Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li October 24, 2025 / 18:18

        <3 Me too. You are welcome.

  10. CGraith's avatar CGraith October 23, 2025 / 02:22

    I don’t know Ping seems a little snappy to make a lifetime commitment to! Good luck to that game!

  11. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta October 23, 2025 / 12:50

    🙌Hurrah – you did the female voice, Ping will be ever so pleased….but even more so, as she now has a sparkler on her finger 🍾

  12. plaridel's avatar plaridel October 24, 2025 / 03:21

    loved the ending. finally he got the hint. 🙂

  13. carol mck's avatar carol mck October 24, 2025 / 14:34

    Fun poem ~ and creative ! Happy weekend to you ~ hugs,

    an artist reflects

  14. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner October 24, 2025 / 15:13

    Such a sunny ending to a rainy day.

  15. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan October 24, 2025 / 20:01

    I am not sure this was the right moment, but the mood did change. I can only imagine their married life will be like table tennis back and forth until someone snaps.

  16. Sadje's avatar Sadje October 25, 2025 / 01:55

    Sweet story Keith

  17. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb October 26, 2025 / 09:20

    Hi Keith – my nickname is Ping … no Pong around, or diamonds sadly!! Well done on the storyline though … cheers Hilary

  18. thisobscurelife's avatar thisobscurelife October 29, 2025 / 06:26

    How sweet, and I really wasn’t expecting such an ending!

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