A short story

...for this week’s The Sunday Whirl

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He spent time serving in the army as a Medical Officer. They’d shoot, he’d heal. They’d maim, he’d mend.

To this day, veterans tell stories that blow can one’s mind. How they survived after suffering injuries that should have proved fatal, is incredible. How he did it, they’ll never understand, but do it he did. Memories of their wounds don’t just trigger harrowing memories but also ones they treasure with eternal gratitude.

Nowadays, he has a practice in town, it’s where you go if you bump your head or catch a cold.  He hands you a medicinal prescription and sends you on your way. He doesn’t talk about his previous life, he’s more than happy being a humble hero. 

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This week’s words are –

serve,  gratitude, medicinal, mind, triggers, blow, control, shoot practice, treasure, you, stories

  I managed to use all but one!.

12 thoughts on “A short story

  1. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz October 19, 2025 / 17:17

    What a beautiful creation you have made of this Sunday’s whirl!

  2. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin October 19, 2025 / 17:48

    So many unsung heroes in our midst, quietly doing their needed work. Great story and well done Keith. Thank you.

  3. destiny's avatar destiny October 19, 2025 / 18:12

    …and this is how their stories live on…🤍

  4. beth's avatar beth October 19, 2025 / 18:44

    And now a happy humble hero

  5. Dale's avatar Dale October 19, 2025 / 19:00

    Beautifully done, Keith. I bet there are many humble heroes out there, keeping their past to themselves.

  6. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings October 20, 2025 / 02:12

    Excellent use of the words! The medical people who simply do what they can and don’t seek accolades are the best, true heroes in every sense of the word.

  7. Sadje's avatar Sadje October 20, 2025 / 10:39

    A true hero. Lovely story Keith

  8. Rene Heartsong's avatar Rene Heartsong October 20, 2025 / 22:57

    Wowwww, this is so lovely, Keith–very moving.

  9. purplepeninportland's avatar purplepeninportland October 26, 2025 / 00:51

    Wonderful take on the prompt, Keith! There must be hundreds of humble heroes out there. They are they ones who keep their services to themselves.

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