100 words

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Let me read it to you!

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I ring his doorbell. Mine goes ping, his boings like Big Ben!

“Welcome to my humble abode”, he says. He always does. If this is humble, I don’t know what mine is!

“Tea on the terrace”, he says. His wife pours earls-grey from a fancy tea pot into delicate porcelain cups perched on pretty little saucers.

I have trouble holding those silly things. I’m used to chunky mugs of builder’s brew.

“Finger sandwiches, scones with strawberry preserve and cream”, he says. 

What’s wrong with crusty rolls and lumps of cake for goodness sake?

How we two are twin brothers I’ll never know!

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Click the Froggies to visit the squares

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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers each Wednesday! Here is today’s photo prompt

PHOTO © David Stewart

41 thoughts on “100 words

  1. Dale's avatar Dale July 2, 2025 / 14:49

    Funny how that often happens. Could be the wife’s influence, though… 😉

      • Dale's avatar Dale July 3, 2025 / 17:09

        😊

  2. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles July 2, 2025 / 15:04

    My sons are twins but not identical in either appearance or attitudes.

  3. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li July 2, 2025 / 17:41


    Keith, I love your surprise ending. I was wondering how these two would be connected. I have a brother like that but we are not twins.

  4. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz July 2, 2025 / 18:40

    Leave the porcelain for the ‘poshers’. I’ll take mine in a mug with you!

  5. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin July 2, 2025 / 19:49

    You are right, Keith, those dainty tea cups I seein store windows hardly measure up to a comfortable mug of earl grey. Nicely done story. Love the graphic with the frogs and the cups.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 3, 2025 / 17:39

      You’re even supposed to stick out your little finger when holding a cup! No, mugs for me !

      • Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin July 3, 2025 / 17:54

        I totally can relate to Keith. Yes, mugs for too, please. Cheers.

  6. beth's avatar beth July 2, 2025 / 21:38

    you balance each other out!

  7. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings July 3, 2025 / 00:16

    Some twins are alike enough to be scary, some you wouldn’t even know were in the same family. Fun story!

  8. Prior...'s avatar Prior... July 3, 2025 / 05:01

    This was well done and I think I liked the humble brother with the ping for a doorbell

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 3, 2025 / 17:53

      The ping brother does seen to be proving the more popular!

      • Prior...'s avatar Prior... July 3, 2025 / 18:50

        ;0)

  9. Nancy's Notes 🖊️🎶's avatar Nancy's Notes 🖊️🎶 July 3, 2025 / 13:57

    Sitting at the kitchen table where the mugs don’t match; that my style!
    Fun story and an unexpected funny ending.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 3, 2025 / 17:58

      There’s nothing wrong with mis-matching, I do it all the time!

      So pleased you liked it, Nancy, thank you.

  10. Sadje's avatar Sadje July 3, 2025 / 14:32

    Twins but polar opposite!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 3, 2025 / 18:09

      They say opposites attract, so I’m sure they love each other really!

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje July 3, 2025 / 18:17

        Yes, probably

  11. Pradeep's avatar Pradeep July 3, 2025 / 14:57


    Twins needn’t be indentical, is it not?

    — Pradeep / Time and Tide

  12. David Stewart's avatar David Stewart July 3, 2025 / 17:29


    I know of twins who do things to intentionally be different, probably since they have been lumped in together their whole lives. Great ending to the story. A very satisfying place to end it.

    -David

  13. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff July 3, 2025 / 19:16

    Dear Keith,

    How different we all are, even the closest of womb mates. Loved this one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  14. plaridel's avatar plaridel July 3, 2025 / 19:19


    of course, the wife has something to do with it. 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 4, 2025 / 14:47

      I used to blame things on my wife – which is one of the reasons I’m single now!

  15. Ergo, the Ogre's avatar Ergo, the Ogre July 4, 2025 / 16:16

    A slice of life! My brothers are like this. Day and night. Good one, Keith!

  16. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta July 4, 2025 / 17:09

    Ha, ha Keith two sides of the same coin 🙌

  17. Dahlia's avatar Dahlia July 5, 2025 / 06:32

    This one made me smile. And i am the twin has been brainwashed by his wife. And we all know, it’s always her fault.

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