A short story for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt. It’s somewhat similar to a tale I told here in 2017, but I couldn’t resist reworking it and letting it have another outing!
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Click his Froggie to visit the squares!
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PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart
What a wonderful response to the prompt, Keith! Loved it.
Thanks so much, Dale!
Brilliant writing Keith. I love your perspective of a child’s point of view and your emphasis on the”OO” ~ An Outstanding hOOt
Thank yOO Suzette!
Great story but a little hard to read (worth it).
Thanks for making the effort, James!
A-Dorable! Even your inner child’s got it Keith!
Haha, thanks, Jodi!
Oh this is delightful. I love the writing of a child in the post.
Thanks Sadje, it was nice to become a child again!
You’re welcome! Very innovative writing
It may be best for all if this child were quietly strangled
Not sure about that!
A fun read. I can read the font because my prescriptions always looked like that back when I hand wrote in the olden days. TrAcEy
Thanks, TrAcEy!!!
I assume that illegible handwriting is a requirement for anyone wishing to join the medical profession!
Indeed, if they could read your medical school application you had to go to a remedial handwriting illegibility course and reapply.
That almost sounds true!!!
If they dont have a toot toot on a airoplane I’d stick to twains tho I think elefants mite go toot toot too!
Haha, I’ll let him know what you said!
*I made numerous attempts to leave a comment on your excellent story without success!
Dear Keith,
This is just delightful.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks so much, Rochelle!
Lovely Keith!
Thanks so much, Di.
cute toot!
thank yoot!
I love this, dear Keith. Never change your delightful ways!
No danger of that, Nancy! Thanks so much.
Life is such fun when your whole future is before you and you never know what you can do, but you want to try it all.
So true, Mimi!
Channeled your inner child for this one. You probably sounded just like this at age five. 🙂
Probably! Thanks, Christine.
This was very clever, a little hard to read – but wow – it was such a fun children’s perspective
I really please you made the effort, thank you!
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man, oh man, you did it again. well done. 🙂
That’s really nice of you, plaridel, thank you.
Fun story!
“Tooters” made me giggle.
…me too when I wrote it! Thanks, Dawn.
What a great idea! Love this!
I’m pleased, thank you!
Cute and the font is great too!
Thanks, I had great fun creating it!
A very creative and adorable story!
Thanks for your generous words, Brenda.
This was so much fun and so creative!
I’m delighted you found it so! Thank you, Dahlia.
What a cute story and the font just makes it. Loved it. 🙂
-David
I’m so pleased you enjoyed it, David, thank you.