100 words

for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.

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Nervous Nellie they called her. She worried about this, fretted over that. She hated staying in but dreaded going out. 

They suggested she see a psychiatrist, but there was enough going on in her mind already, the thought of someone else climbing inside was unbearable!

She needed a hobby, something to distract her whenever she felt stressed. She took up painting and playing the guitar but it didn’t help.

She tried macrame, but became more high-strung than ever.

Everything changed when she met Cocksure Colin! Nellie became more confident and Colin less swaggering. They tied the knot and moved to Middleground!

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PHOTO PROMPT © Lisa Fox.

37 thoughts on “100 words

  1. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough May 7, 2025 / 13:51

    A great ending twist! Hope their marriage never becomes a tug-of war.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 8, 2025 / 15:00

      I’m pleased, thank you!

      *I had great difficulty trying to leave a comment beneath your post – but I liked it a lot!

  2. granonine's avatar granonine May 7, 2025 / 15:33

    What a creative interpretation of this photo–ending, one hopes, in happily ever after 🙂

  3. elmowrites's avatar elmowrites May 7, 2025 / 15:53

    All’s well that ends well!

  4. beth's avatar beth May 7, 2025 / 16:33

    happily ever after more or. less )

  5. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li May 7, 2025 / 17:23

    Such a good story, Keith. The two balancing out each other’s extremes sounds ideal for each. I wish them the best.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 8, 2025 / 15:22

      They’ll be fine I’m sure!

      Thanks for your interesting photo, Lisa!

      • Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li May 8, 2025 / 16:24

        You are welcome 🙂

  6. Sadje's avatar Sadje May 7, 2025 / 18:31

    Excellent use of the image Keith.

  7. plaridel's avatar plaridel May 8, 2025 / 06:10

    i love happy ending. well done. 🙂

  8. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff May 8, 2025 / 12:51


    Dear Keith,

    I love where you went with the prompt. You tied up all the loose ends in only 100 words, Perfection.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  9. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan May 8, 2025 / 20:42

    I enjoyed how you brought the couple together. I wonder if some baby clothes will be knitted soon.

  10. Prior...'s avatar Prior... May 8, 2025 / 20:56

    middleground sounds like the right colorful place for these two

  11. Dahlia's avatar Dahlia May 10, 2025 / 08:40

    The perfect kind of love story. Very well written too – “She hated staying in but dreaded going out.” This is so me! Loved the font/artwork of your title (and the title as well).

  12. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts May 11, 2025 / 13:45

    Middle ground is okay. It’s less stressful. Nice one, Keith!

  13. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz May 13, 2025 / 13:13


    Sounds like the perfect pairing!

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