225 words

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I’m not allowed on the other side so I busk here. I try to stop you by singing All by Myself, but you walk on by. I sing Walk on By, and guess what, you walk on by.

In my upturned cap, there’s a handful of coppers, a pound coin and a screwed up chocolate wrapper. You’re probably thinking ‘he’s on drugs or booze and if I give him money he’ll spend it on his habit’. I can’t blame you. I look a little scruffy, very scruffy. Dirty even. 

You strut past like a peacock pretending not to notice me. I watch you and your mates leaving McDonald’s. I doubt you’re even hungry. But me? I’m bloody starving and I’ll probably have to go another day without proper food.

See him, on the other side? Him with trendy clothes and a smug look on his face? We were mates years ago. Last time I saw him I  was Jack the Lad. I remember giving him a bed for the night and a square meal or two when he was going through hard times. Now he pretends not to know me. But I don’t care.

No, actually, I do.

Smile. Sing your heart out. Give ‘em a dose of soul music. Show ‘em Elvis lives. Soon I’ll cross to the other side.  I will.

Please God, please say I will.

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Thanks to Jenne Gray and C.E.Ayr for hosting The Unicorn Challenge

26 thoughts on “225 words

  1. beth's avatar beth April 18, 2025 / 14:01

    aw……)))))

  2. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz April 18, 2025 / 15:07

    We fail to realize sometimes that beneath that scruffy exterior is a person just like us. I really enjoyed this, Keith.

  3. ceayr's avatar ceayr April 18, 2025 / 15:09

    Surprisingly poignant piece, Keith.

    Love it.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings April 19, 2025 / 16:43

      I thought I’d have a go at something different! Thanks so much C.E.

  4. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough April 18, 2025 / 15:13

    What a poignant, interesting tale you’ve made from this prompt! I guess there are various reasons for busking. Some may be this desperate. I also heard of one enterprising young man who paid university fees through busking.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings April 19, 2025 / 16:44

      Indeed there are, Christine. I have to admire that young man!

  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje April 18, 2025 / 15:28

    A very moving monologue

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje April 19, 2025 / 16:54

        You’re very welcome

  6. jenne49's avatar jenne49 April 18, 2025 / 15:28

    So, I accept that I’m the third person to use ‘poignant’ for this story – but it’s exactly the word and the thesaurus doesn’t tell me any different.
    I have a sore spot for this busker – and for so many others, whose stories we don’t have time to find out about.
    Beautifully written, Keith.
    You’ve left me with food for thought.
    (Oops, unfortunate choice of word there…)

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings April 19, 2025 / 17:08

      There are different types of buskers, those that need to, those that want to and more besides.

      I’m for ever wishing there was a suitable synonym for poignant, but there really isn’t! Thank you so much for using it on this occasion, I’m truly thankful.

  7. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander April 18, 2025 / 17:13

    Keith, this piece hits me right in the gut. It’s raw and beautifully human—quietly defiant, painfully honest, and full of soul.

    ~David

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings April 19, 2025 / 17:16

      I’m so pleased it came across that way. Thanks so much for your generous words, David.

  8. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 April 18, 2025 / 18:01

    Some buskers are really good, and I have been known to dance to some (crutches come to mind). Sad story Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings April 19, 2025 / 17:24

      Thanks, Di.

      There are some great ‘professional’ ones! A guy near me never fails to draw a crowd!

      • pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 April 19, 2025 / 18:52

        We’ve heard some good ones but the wailing Willies were in Poole!

  9. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings April 18, 2025 / 20:29

    Everyone needs to give grace, we never know when we’ll need to receive it.

  10. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall April 19, 2025 / 16:26

    That was so sad. But, of course, well done, Keith.

  11. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin April 19, 2025 / 19:37

    A heart breaking story Keith. Well penned, truth.

  12. clark's avatar clark April 21, 2025 / 16:56


    and yet who can say what they see beyond the footlights (real or metaphorical)

    …sorry to go all left field, but seeing how others took the ‘P word’ and totally did it proper, didn’t want to take a chance…

    good ‘corn yo

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