Hello dear!

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Every day, just before opening my cafe I would hear the tap-tap of her umbrella on the window.

‘Hello dear’, she would say as she walked in and hung her knitted hat and brolly on a hook.

She always did that!

She would study the menu for ages before calling me over. ‘Dish-of-the-day and a nice cup of tea, dear’, she would say.

She said that every time!

One day, when I placed her meal on the table, she seemed to be sleeping.

She never woke up.

It’s not my cafe anymore, but her knitted hat and umbrella still hang on the hook.  I like that.

I’m certain she would too.

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Thanks to Jenne Gray and CEAyr for hosting The Unicorn Challenge

© Ayr/Gray

20 thoughts on “Hello dear!

  1. beth's avatar beth December 14, 2024 / 12:25

    aw, that’s beautiful

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje December 14, 2024 / 13:15

    Aww, a very beautiful story.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje December 14, 2024 / 15:18

        You’re most welcome

  3. ceayr's avatar ceayr December 14, 2024 / 14:30

    You’ve been on the soppy pills again, haven’t you, Keef!

    Sweet story, mon brave.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 14, 2024 / 14:47

      I have but fear not, I’ve almost used them up!

      Thank you, kind sir.

  4. jenne49's avatar jenne49 December 14, 2024 / 16:06

    You’re back! You’re back!

    And with a lovely, sweet story.
    Every lone old lady should have a cafe like that.
    And not every cafe merits having a woolly hat and umbrella hanging as reminders of kindness shown.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 14, 2024 / 16:09

      I do believe I am! That was fiction, but in my bistro I had a late customer’s walking stick on the wall!

  5. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin December 14, 2024 / 17:56

    Deeply felt story Keith. You handled the end gracefully. Cheers.

  6. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough December 14, 2024 / 22:35

    Likely she came to be among people; I like it that she passed away doing what she enjoyed. Lovely ending.

  7. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 December 14, 2024 / 22:58

    Nice story Keith. At least she passed away in comfortable and familiar surroundings

  8. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings December 15, 2024 / 00:40

    She enjoyed her days until the last possible moment, and yes, she’d love having her hat and umbrella there. Nicely told!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 16, 2024 / 15:10

      It was like a second home to her. Thanks, Mimi.

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