100 words!

For Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.

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It’s waiting for me. A pot of gold. How do I know? The fortune teller said so.

She charged me £5, a step in the wrong direction, but wealth awaits me I’m sure.

I’ve done the lottery, I’ve bet on the gee-gee’s, I’ve played bingo, but still not discovered it. With every step I take, it moves a step away.

Down there, a penny on the pavement! Surely, that’s a sign. 

Up there, a rainbow. I just need to find its end, here goes!

Oh, it’s faded away. Just like my dream. I’m asking the fortune teller for a refund.

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Prod Froggie to see the squares!

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PHOTO PROMPT © Mr. Binks

48 thoughts on “100 words!

  1. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff October 9, 2024 / 14:15

    Dear Keith,

    Alas, he’s looking for wealth and success in all the wrong places. Amusing read. 😀

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje October 9, 2024 / 14:28

    That pot of gold is made of rainbow dreams.

  3. MrBinks's avatar MrBinks October 9, 2024 / 14:47

    Annoyingly relatable.

  4. beth's avatar beth October 9, 2024 / 14:48

    hahahahaha – well at least you have the penny –

  5. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles October 9, 2024 / 16:10

    I’m currently writing a story based on superstitions. Finding a penny is considered good luck, but sometimes, it’s not if “tails” is facing up.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 10, 2024 / 13:00

      Indeed it is! I’ve picked up few, but so far, no luck!

  6. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin October 9, 2024 / 16:38

    Well done Keith. That gold one seeks is within the heart…no need to look further..as the saying goes..we are richer than we think. Nicely done parable..
    **”Betting on the gee-gees”… I had to look that one up…thanks for introducing me to a new term!.

  7. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli October 9, 2024 / 18:47

    Poor guy can’t catch a break!

  8. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan October 9, 2024 / 20:44

    Every dream is a pot of gold. I wonder if only he got out of bed, then fortune may roll his way. perhaps, learning a new profession, like fortune telling might work.

  9. CGraith's avatar CGraith October 9, 2024 / 21:30

    Cute story! Such optimism even as he gives his money away!

  10. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings October 9, 2024 / 21:44

    Ah, friend, the surest way to double your money is fold it in half and put it back in your wallet.

  11. Kritika's avatar Kritika October 10, 2024 / 04:26

    There is no refund now. Terms and Conditions applied *
    😀

  12. Sandra's avatar Sandra October 10, 2024 / 10:43

    Like a lot of things, when you finally get to where you thought it was … it’s no longer there. And before you know it, it doesn’t exist any longer. Good one, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 10, 2024 / 13:07

      We’ve probably all been there in one way or another! Thanks, Sandra.

  13. plaridel's avatar plaridel October 11, 2024 / 23:16

    i suppose it’s a bad idea to quit now. just keep looking for that pot of gold. 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 13, 2024 / 15:53

      That’s what I’ve always thought, but I’m still waiting!

      • The Mindful Migraine Blog's avatar The Mindful Migraine Blog October 14, 2024 / 00:37

        I found a silver coin just this morning in the council carpark – so yay – it does happen!

  14. robprice59's avatar robprice59 October 12, 2024 / 11:02

    Never met a broke bookie!

  15. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts October 12, 2024 / 14:33

    He certainly needs a refund. Entertaining tale, Keith!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 13, 2024 / 15:36

      Whether or not he’ll get one, I really can’t tell! Thanks so much, Brenda.

  16. thisobscurelife's avatar thisobscurelife October 13, 2024 / 04:43

    that fortune teller will probably be as difficult to find again as that pot of gold.

  17. Angela Adams's avatar Angela Adams October 14, 2024 / 14:50

    Hehehe! Fun read! Sometimes I think we dream about the wrong things.

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