246 words!

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I was thinking – don’t laugh, I do now and again – what fun I could have if I was a shadow! I’m certain mine would rather have a mind of its own. 

The other day I plonked myself down on a bench on the way back from the shops, and I saw my shadow staring up at me. I waved to it, and it waved back. I tried jerking my arm in an attempt to catch it out, but it jerked its arm back at me.

If I was a shadow, I would deliberately do something different from my human friend now and again. I could remain still when he moved. I could move when he was still. I could make rude gestures at him with my fingers! I could try tripping him up! 

I think shadows get a bum deal. They have no choice about when they appear. That’s down to sun during the day and lamp posts at night. I’d want more freedom to come and go as I pleased.

I was walking along a street the other day and my poor shadow was flat on the ground one second, climbing a wall the next, then back on the ground again. Up, down, up, down, up down, it must have been so exhausting.

I bet shadows wish they could break free when they spot an attractive shadowess, they must have feelings too. 

I’m going to stop thinking now. I beg your pardon? How dare you!

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Thanks to Jenne Gray and CEAyr for hosting The Unicorn Challenge

© Ayr/Gray

24 thoughts on “246 words!

  1. beth's avatar beth July 19, 2024 / 14:33

    so funny, the young children and I, in my class, would always try to run or jump away from them. they refuse to go away

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje July 19, 2024 / 15:49

    Peter Pan’s shadow was like that. Gave him a tough time

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje July 19, 2024 / 17:17

        👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 20, 2024 / 11:34

      I attempted to take nonsense to another level, and it seems I succeeded!

      Your ‘friend’ was clearly thinking along the same lines as me – there’s somethng familiar about him, but I can’t quite put my finger on it!

  3. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough July 19, 2024 / 18:48

    Shades of RL Stevenson! A clever expression of imagination!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 21, 2024 / 14:27

      In his shadow maybe! Thanks for your kind words, Christine!

  4. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin July 19, 2024 / 20:04

    This is super deep, expressive, and profound, Keith. Bravo!!

  5. jenne49's avatar jenne49 July 19, 2024 / 21:16

    Good fun, Keith, and I’m sure you’d be a mischievous shadow!
    I’m still smiling.

  6. clark's avatar clark July 19, 2024 / 22:04

    Like jenne, I’m smiling. For me it started with: “…and it waved back.”

    (Full Disclosure: there was some eyebrow action in the read as well, mostly a non-verbal, “How will he keep this idea a step ahead of us?”)

    must excellent ‘cornage

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 21, 2024 / 14:49

      I can imagine a small child being a little scared! Thanks for your generous words.

  7. Margaret's avatar Margaret July 24, 2024 / 00:51

    Lovely bit of whimsy. I’d like to swap places, let my shadow carry on with all the mundane events of life while I flit away and have a few adventures.

    I do like a bit of magic and fun in stories. Thanks for providing a little here.

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