Let me think…

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I’d love to write some poems

Poems of my own

Ones which people want to read

So I’ll become well known.

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I sit and stare into my screen

The words just fail to flow

I scratch my head and bite my nails

My poem just won’t grow.

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The other day a line appeared

inside my fuzzy head.

But could I find some words to rhyme?

I wrote some prose instead.

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If they can do it why can’t I?

It’s not for want of trying.

My friends can do it, it’s not fair

 Sometimes I feel like crying.

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So let’s have a practice

find some words wot rhyme.

My thinking cap’s perched on my head

They are bound to come in time.

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Let me think….

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Bard, card, lard, yard, jarred

Plop, hop, drop, cop, mop

Kite, white, fight, might, plight

Stop, crop, lop, bop, flop.

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That didn’t help, at least I tried

I don’t know what to do.

But wait a minute something stirred!

A feeling that’s quite new.

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Here goes!

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‘He gazed into her longing eyes

And saw inside her mind.

He gazed at her and realised

that he…he…he…..’

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Oh poo!

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I guess I’ll never make the grade

I’ll never be a bard.

Poetry is not my thing

It’s far too bloody hard!

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Welcome back Sadje, and thank you for hosting What Do You See?

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34 thoughts on “Let me think…

  1. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin June 24, 2024 / 17:17

    Splendid poetry Keith. You had me chuckling at your excellent rhyming schema “Bard…yard…bop lop, flop…”LOL!!
    Plus, an excellent innovative take on the prompt.

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje June 24, 2024 / 17:17

    I think you did it very well my friend. So many thoughts and rhyming words. 😁
    Thanks for joining in.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje June 25, 2024 / 17:28

        Yes, it does. That’s why I seldom can find any rhyming words. 😜

  3. Dale's avatar Dale June 24, 2024 / 18:44

    And yet…. and yet! You wrote this! Lots of fun and very Keith!

      • Dale's avatar Dale June 25, 2024 / 17:08

        You should be!!

  4. Patricia's avatar Patricia June 24, 2024 / 18:58

    I always look forward to your posts. Often you make me laugh and you always make me think.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 25, 2024 / 17:18

      You laugh and think

      that’s nice to hear,

      rather that

      than shed a tear!

  5. Belladonna's avatar Belladonna June 24, 2024 / 19:34

    Keith you are good!!!!!! Love this one❤️

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 25, 2024 / 17:22

      Belladonna you’re so kind

      words that rhyme are hard to find!

      • Belladonna's avatar Belladonna June 26, 2024 / 03:21

        ANd there you go again. LOL You make it seem so easy

  6. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough June 24, 2024 / 21:14

    I’d suggest rhymer.com, but not sure if it would make much difference. 😉

    Still, well done. As always, a clever response to the prompt.

  7. beth's avatar beth June 24, 2024 / 23:12

    don’t forget that poems do not need to rhyme.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 25, 2024 / 17:43

      I’d forgotten that

      I’m such a twat … sorry, an idiot!

      • beth's avatar beth June 25, 2024 / 17:58

        no worries, it’s only on my mind because my poems very rarely rhyme

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 25, 2024 / 17:52

      I like an egg

      I like it’s yolk,

      but best of all

      I like a joke!

  8. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb June 25, 2024 / 08:20

    Hi Keith – I think the sun’s gone to your head … ?! Well done – cheers Hilary

      • hilarymb's avatar hilarymb June 26, 2024 / 17:16

        That’s the way with sun in this country … enjoy or hate the blisters … watch it – well that would be difficult wouldn’t it … but you know what I mean – I’m stay inside … and go out with ‘an ‘at’ … cheers H

  9. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall June 25, 2024 / 13:49

    How excellent, Keith – who needs a rhyme?!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 26, 2024 / 16:09

      Life’s too short to try and rhyme

      I’d have a go if I had more time!

  10. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged July 2, 2024 / 04:40

    You, dear Keith, are an excellent writer/poet for you can make people laugh…rhyme or no rhyme,

  11. Susi Bocks's avatar Susi Bocks July 4, 2024 / 20:31

    I think your take was worthy of being called poetry!

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