It’s Monday!

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four-seasons-all-year-round

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Her mother holds her, feeds her, cleans and dresses her;

 always there for every need.

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One moment the warmth of the womb, 

the next a strange new place, 

for she’s in the springtime of her life.

 

In the summer of her life she blossoms, blooms 

and brings into this world a child of her own. 

 

Weary with work she looks forward to the future, 

for now it’s the autumn of her life and 

her child is now a mother too.

 

In the winter of her life, 

she gazes at the world through unfamiliar windows,

 unsure of where or who she is.

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Her daughter holds her, feeds her, cleans and dresses her;

 always there for every need.

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Thanks to Sadje for hosting the What Do You See? photo prompt.

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Image credit; ColinMaynard Unsplash

27 thoughts on “It’s Monday!

  1. beth's avatar beth June 3, 2024 / 12:23

    Beautiful, the circle of life

  2. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander June 3, 2024 / 12:36

    And so it goes. Beautifully written, Keith. <3

    ~David

  3. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb June 3, 2024 / 13:29

    Hi Keith – yes that’s what my mother said to me … it should be me looking after (out) for you … but as you say the circle of life. I was lucky the last few years were good … my Ma was cared for and I visited or made sure she had visits twice a day, and picked up any pieces – hospital trips etc … it was all good … our times are a-coming in …. ?! Cheers on a lovely sunny day – Hilary

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 4, 2024 / 12:59

      Similarly to mine, Hilary. I can’t bear the thought of being a burden. Here’s to sunny days ahead!

  4. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall June 3, 2024 / 14:22

    Beautifully done, Keith.

  5. Dale's avatar Dale June 3, 2024 / 14:54

    This is beautiful, Keith. The seasons of a woman’s life. Love it.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 4, 2024 / 13:20

      I’m pleased you liked it, Dale, not my normal kinda thing but I thought it worth a try!

      • Dale's avatar Dale June 4, 2024 / 13:30

        You did a marvellous thing!

  6. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin June 3, 2024 / 16:15

    Absolutely beautiful capture of the graciousness that is the fullness of the circle of life. Bravo, Keith…sublime writing!!

  7. Misky's avatar Misky June 3, 2024 / 17:00

    A gentle and sensitive reflection.

  8. Sadje's avatar Sadje June 3, 2024 / 18:04

    This is a very evocative and moving story Keith. The life comes a full circle. Thanks for joining in.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje June 4, 2024 / 15:58

        You’re always most welcome

  9. Indira's avatar Indira June 5, 2024 / 13:47

    What a lovely poem, Keith.

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