A short story …

Keith's Ramblings

…for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers

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     My, oh my, just look at my pie, a foot across, six inches high!

It looks amazing darling, well done. What’s inside?

     I knew it would impress, just have a guess!

Let me think, the smell doesn’t give much away. How about a clue?

     It may be meat, or something sweet, no matter what you’re in for a treat!

That’s no help!

     It’s something nice, tell you what, I’ll give you a slice!

Oh dear, I don’t really like it.

     Nor do I, it couldn’t be worse. It was worth a try, but I’ll stick to verse!

About your poetry darling….

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45 thoughts on “A short story …”

  6. MrBinks May 22, 2024 / 16:06

    Ha! Very good, and fun recording too!

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  12. CGraith May 23, 2024 / 02:07

    It’s a winner! Enter it in a humor contest! 🙂

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    • Keith's Ramblings May 23, 2024 / 17:35

      …and some are natural poets…unfortunately she’s not! Thanks, Rochelle.

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  15. Angela May 23, 2024 / 19:51

    Hehehe! The dialogue really captured the two characters, I think :). Great title!

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  17. msjadeli May 24, 2024 / 23:34

    Amusing exchange, Keith. She can’t win for losing, can she. I wonder what was in the pie…

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  18. Margaret May 25, 2024 / 04:05

    Fun dialogue. Great title. And the poems rhyme – that’s a good start. 🫤

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  19. GHLearner May 25, 2024 / 13:09

    After this last sentence, there will be a pie in the eye. What a fun piece.

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  21. Sandra May 27, 2024 / 10:27

    I’m wondering wha fate has befallen the guinea pig…

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