100 Words

for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers.

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It’s a long climb, puff , but it’s worth every, huff,  step. I mean, just look!

Before us, green fields, trees, hedgerows and cute little lambkins.

To our left, rolling hills crowned with puffy white clouds.

Turn right … whoops, mind the wonky floorboard …  and gaze at the sea, an endless pool of blue, well, it’s greyish today but awe-inspiring nonetheless. 

Above us, our future. Below, our past. 

What lies behind I wonder, and what’s that smell? Poo, it’s the rubbish tip.

However, every empty can and every screwed-up wrapper has a tale to tell … where are you going? 

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41 thoughts on “100 Words

  1. beth's avatar beth May 15, 2024 / 16:58

    Eek!

  2. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon May 15, 2024 / 17:08

    Leave it all long enough and it will become a future archaeologist’s treasure trove

  3. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin May 15, 2024 / 20:01

    Yes indeed every wrapper tells a story. Great take on the prompt Keith.

  4. Tessa's avatar Tessa May 15, 2024 / 20:26

    Nice view it seems like, but the smell not so nice. I would hate to climb all that distance and come across a lovely view with a smell.

  5. Michael Humphris's avatar Michael Humphris May 16, 2024 / 00:30

    Made me smile, yes, litter and poo, are the problems of humanity

  6. Sadje's avatar Sadje May 16, 2024 / 07:02

    Quite the tour guide- not 😂😂😂

  7. justjoyfulness's avatar justjoyfulness May 16, 2024 / 09:41

    I wasn’t expecting the mundane after all that sublime beauty 🙂

  8. Dale's avatar Dale May 16, 2024 / 12:00

    And here I was worrying about the wonky floorboard!

      • Dale's avatar Dale May 17, 2024 / 13:10

        Right!

  9. R.M. Carlson's avatar R.M. Carlson May 16, 2024 / 12:50

    Delightful tale! Really enjoyed reading it!

  10. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff May 16, 2024 / 12:53

    Dear Keith,

    I like how you end with a chuckle. The rubbish pile’s a bit of a downer, isn’t it?

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  11. plaridel's avatar plaridel May 16, 2024 / 21:40

    be careful out there. it goes down with the territory. 🙂

  12. Liz Young's avatar Liz Young May 17, 2024 / 22:17

    Where was his audience going? To escape the philosophical lecture, I should imagine!

  13. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli May 18, 2024 / 01:59

    Keep on the sunny side — until the sunny side burns you to a crisp! You read your story perfectly, Keith.

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli May 18, 2024 / 18:36

        You’re most welcome.

  14. thisobscurelife's avatar thisobscurelife May 18, 2024 / 22:31

    People really are terrible trashy. Good take one the prompt.

  15. granonine's avatar granonine May 19, 2024 / 01:55

    Hilarious! I’m guessing the other person is going to find a better vierw 🙂

  16. The Sicilian Storyteller's avatar The Sicilian Storyteller May 19, 2024 / 04:24

    As William Bendix as Chester A. Riley in “The Life of Riley” would always say …. “what a revolting development this is!”

    Oops, my age is showing!

    Fun story, Keith.

  17. Sandra's avatar Sandra May 19, 2024 / 11:19

    He sounds like a rivetting companion to accompany you on life’s journey.

  18. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner May 19, 2024 / 20:12

    That stinks, after all the huff and puff. Not your story, though, that shines and made me laugh.

  19. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda May 20, 2024 / 20:23

    Ah, there are heaps and then there are … well … heaps … 😉

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