Another story…

After submitting my first story to The Unicorn Challenge, I remembered  a piece that I wrote  back in 2015 along similar lines. It went like this …

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All is quiet. A girl sits alone on the grass. In her hand, a flickering candle. ‘All you need is love’ she whispers. 

One by one the village folk join her. ‘All you need is love’ they sing.

Somewhere in Russia, a devushka wanders into a square clutching a candle. Minutes later the square is filled with people singing. ‘Vvse, chto tebe nuzhno – eto lyubov’. All you need is love.

Across the Latin world, joyful crowds gather. ‘Todo lo que necesitas es amor’ they sing as golden flames dance to the tune.

Across Africa, Asia and the Middle East people join in song. The world is illuminated by candles, brightened by song. To the east, south, north, and the farthest west they sing.

In war-torn countries, they lay down their arms and pick up candles. Sworn enemies sing together. ‘Kl ma tahtaj ‘iilayh hu alhabu’. Suddenly the world is a happy place, we sing as one. All you need is love.

Then all is quiet again. A girl sits alone on the grass. In her hand, a flickering candle ‘Love is all we need’ she whispers…...

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For reasons that may be obvious , I’ve not attempted an audio!

Thanks to Jenne Gray and C.E.Ayr for hosting The Unicorn Challenge

 

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21 thoughts on “Another story…

  1. Denise Hammond's avatar Denise Hammond January 20, 2024 / 14:41

    Beautiful. Just beautiful. Thank you.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 20, 2024 / 14:43

      That’s so kind of you, Denise, thanks so much.

  2. Dale's avatar Dale January 20, 2024 / 17:40

    Ah yes… starts with one. Beautiful story, Keith.

      • Dale's avatar Dale January 21, 2024 / 15:11

        💞

  3. beth's avatar beth January 20, 2024 / 18:18

    Such a beautiful, loving wish

  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje January 21, 2024 / 11:28

    Oh how I wish this was the reality

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje January 21, 2024 / 16:11

        🙏🏼👏🏼

  5. clark's avatar clark January 21, 2024 / 21:09

    Excellento

  6. Maria Michaela's avatar Maria Michaela January 22, 2024 / 09:46

    I love this Keith. Love is all we need, indeed

  7. jenne49's avatar jenne49 January 22, 2024 / 19:07

    Imagine…
    What a beautiful and heartwarming story, Keith.
    As Captain Picard might say, ‘Make it so!’

  8. ceayr's avatar ceayr January 23, 2024 / 08:53

    Nice thought, old pip, but I think the candle’s gone out…

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