Six

A few words for Six Sentence Stories where the given word is Turn

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Let me read it to you.

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“Will you welcome Emma Mia and uphold her in her new life in Christ?” 

The proud parents, the godparents and priest are gathered around the font, family and friends sit upon the pews.

A creak as the door slowly opens, some turn to see who’s entering; “Christ saves you as your own”. 

He stands at the rear and looks on;  “Receive the sign of the cross”

The babe’s mother glances in his direction; “I baptise you in the name of the Father, Son and Holy Spirit”

The father’s parents smile, ‘if only they knew’ he thinks as he crosses himself, turns and leaves the church.

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Thanks to Denise at GirlieOnTheEdge for hosting.

18 thoughts on “Six

  1. clark's avatar clark November 2, 2023 / 12:10

    Like it.

    The best of Sixes are, to a subtle (and entirely optional) extent, the product of a co-authorship with the Reader

  2. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny November 2, 2023 / 15:41

    Nice suggestion of an affair and the damage that adultery brings to a family.

  3. beth's avatar beth November 2, 2023 / 19:25

    ❤️

  4. Denise's avatar Denise November 2, 2023 / 19:28

    I’ve lost count of how many illegitimate cousins I have found in my family tree. Of course, better than discovering your fifth cousin murdered his wife.

  5. Misky's avatar Misky November 4, 2023 / 12:44

    Excellent storyline.

  6. Nicole Horlings's avatar Nicole Horlings November 4, 2023 / 14:24

    I have to echo others, and say that I like the subtlety in this story.

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