A short story

for Friday Fictioneers which is hosted by Rochelle.

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I’m a detective, a private eye. I’m actually quite good at it. My fellow sleuths claim my success is more by chance than cleverness. They call me Sheerluck Holmes. They’re only jealous.

My mission, which I chose to accept, was to follow a woman thought to be fabricating falsehoods. Hardly surprising, therefore, that I found her in a cloth shop, the perfect place for me to gather material evidence

Whilst there, I bought a quilt. Very useful should I decide to go undercover!

Tomorrow I’ll be at an airport baggage reclaim, watching a suspected smuggler. I’m bound to crack his case.

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44 thoughts on “A short story

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje July 12, 2023 / 13:53

    Very clever and entertaining story Keith 😂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 12, 2023 / 17:09

      Thank you, delighted to have entertained you, Sadje!

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje July 12, 2023 / 17:21

        You’re most welcome

  2. Denise's avatar Denise July 12, 2023 / 14:21

    You outdid yourself with the puns. BTW, lovely fabric store. My clothes sewing days are far in my past.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 12, 2023 / 17:35

      Mine never started, although I did once try sewing on a button!

  3. beth's avatar beth July 12, 2023 / 14:43

    so cute!

  4. ganga1996's avatar ganga1996 July 12, 2023 / 15:04

    Love all the puns 👌!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 12, 2023 / 17:52

      Nothing like a pun or two to brighten one’s day! Thank you.

  5. granonine's avatar granonine July 12, 2023 / 15:52

    Sheerluck Holmes. Made me laugh! You never disappoint, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 12, 2023 / 17:59

      Thanks, Linda. I heard that name ages ago and I’ve been waiting for a chance to use it!

  6. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin July 12, 2023 / 20:50

    Fabulous humor. I love the way you said the word “undercover” in your reading…Lol!!

      • Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin July 13, 2023 / 13:07

        Always a pleasure. Thank you for taking the extra effort to audio your work. It adds great depth to the written word!

  7. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli July 12, 2023 / 21:25

    I love how you characterized Sheerluck Holmes in word, deed, and froggie. Nicely done, Keith!

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli July 13, 2023 / 15:49

        You’re welcome 🙂

  8. Tannille's avatar Tannille July 13, 2023 / 05:26

    Sheerluck Holmes — tells us everything we need to know. 🤣

  9. James Mcewan's avatar James Mcewan July 13, 2023 / 10:50

    I trust it’s curtains for the criminals and they are locked up in the punitentiary.

  10. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff July 13, 2023 / 12:35

    Dear Keith,

    It doesn’t get much better than Sheerluck Holmes. Brilliant story that provides loads of pun. Seamingly you kept me in stitches. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  11. Alicia Jamtaas's avatar Alicia Jamtaas July 13, 2023 / 16:20

    This brightened my day. So many clever referrals to fabric.

  12. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug July 13, 2023 / 20:44

    “Sheerluck Holmes” 🤣 Brilliant!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 14, 2023 / 12:34

      That name seems to have gone down well, I’ve been wanting to use it for ages!

      • Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug July 14, 2023 / 19:51

        It’s so satisfying when you’ve been holding on to something that you finally get to use, and it goes over well.

  13. CGraith's avatar CGraith July 14, 2023 / 02:07

    So funny! You win the award for the best humor! Totally enjoyable ramble.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 14, 2023 / 12:35

      Thanks so much! I’d like to thank my muse, my…..

  14. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta July 14, 2023 / 19:10

    😅Keith, you never fail to disappoint, so full of puns too numerous to mention, I don’t know how your brain does it, brilliant 😄

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 17, 2023 / 15:08

      Nor do I Angela! Thanks so much for your kind words.

  15. plaridel's avatar plaridel July 14, 2023 / 19:29

    very clever. you never disappoint. well done.

  16. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner July 16, 2023 / 14:03

    A perfectly spun tale, Sheerluck. I love it.

  17. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta July 17, 2023 / 07:15

    Hi Keith hope you don’t mind me contacting you I currently have the baton for Marla”s pass the baton story challenge I’m going to post my piece today and wonder if you would take the baton from me to carry the story on? Ange

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 17, 2023 / 15:11

      Sadly I can’t but thanks for asking me. – I’ve explained why over at your place.

  18. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta July 17, 2023 / 15:19

    No worries – have a lovely time 🙌

  19. Dawn M. Miller's avatar Dawn M. Miller July 19, 2023 / 01:52

    So many puns..so few words.
    You did good, I smiled throughout this story.

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