Two hundred and fifty words

for The Unicorn Challenge which is brought to us by Jenne Gray and C.E.Ayr.

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I have a modest little shop on a backstreet where people pop in when their watches need new batteries and straps.

Sometimes I repair proper watches, ones which go tick-tock. I love nothing more than peering at intricate mechanisms through my trusty old magnifying glass.  I occasionally get to fiddle with clocks, big ones, small ones, but never before had I been offered a job like this!

I’d been contacted by the Dean of the cathedral. For years I’d gazed in awe at the splendid clock atop the tower, never imagining I’d one day get my hands on it!  All it needed was servicing, something carried out every fifty years.

I arrived at the cathedral, explained to one of the visitor guides who I was and asked for directions to the tower. Minutes later, I started the long climb to the top.

My goodness, it was steep. I hadn’t got far before my knees started complaining. Half an hour later, I was out of breath, my heart beating like a drum. But I carried on regardless. ‘This might be the last thing I ever do’, I said to myself, ‘but what a way to go’!

When I reached the belfry, I fell to the floor, exhausted.  It was then my phone rang. It was the Dean asking where I was. Apparently, the clock I was employed to service was not the one at the top but the ancient timepiece down below in the vestry.

I started the long climb down…

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I do believe this is Arras, a favourite town of mine where I enjoyed many a fine meal in the square during my years living in Northern France. The view from the belfry is amazing and well worth the climb!  

f I’m not mistaken, this is Arras, one of my favourite French towns where I enjoyed many a fine meal in the square during my years living in Northern France. The view from the belfry is amazing and well worth the climb!  

 

19 thoughts on “Two hundred and fifty words

  1. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin June 10, 2023 / 13:21

    Awesome! Yes, sometimes one hears what one wants to believe…ending us in the wrong place after a steep climb.
    I like the quickened pace of the story that you crafted with your word choices… I could actually “see” him, huffing and puffing, climbing the stairs. Nicely done, Keith.

  2. beth's avatar beth June 10, 2023 / 13:56

    Oh!!!)

  3. Denise's avatar Denise June 10, 2023 / 14:44

    When I went to Europe in 1969, my friend and I climbed to the top of everything. Notre Dame, Pisa Tower, Vatican… You certainly made me chuckle when I read this. Nice.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 10, 2023 / 17:35

      What’s a trip without a climb? The Vatican was quite a challenge, especially near the top where the walls slope inwards! Delighted to have amused you Denise!

  4. Patricia's avatar Patricia June 10, 2023 / 15:07

    Hopefully you were paid by the hour and not the task.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 10, 2023 / 17:32

      I was paid in groats which went out of circulation in 1856!

    • ceayr's avatar ceayr June 10, 2023 / 15:11

      PS Good story!

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 10, 2023 / 17:29

        Now you come to mention it, I have visited the tunnels although the memories are a little vague as it would have been over 30 years ago! Thanks for the link. It’s only a day trip away for me so I really ought to pay Arras another visit just for old times’ sake..

  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje June 10, 2023 / 17:45

    The view from the belfry compensated for the hard climb.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje June 10, 2023 / 17:58

        🫶🏼⭐️

  6. Doug Jacquier's avatar Doug Jacquier June 10, 2023 / 20:02

    Fun piece, Keith. Reminded me of when my wife and I visited La Sagrada Familia in Barcelona. You can get a lift to the top but, unless you have a disability, you have to walk down a seemingly never-ending spiral stairway with no handrail. 😉

  7. jenne49's avatar jenne49 June 10, 2023 / 20:26

    Oh dear! I was exhausted with him by the climb. Good story, Keith. Very human. We hear what we want to hear…

  8. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings June 11, 2023 / 00:27

    Oh, well, maybe the big clock in the tower will need its servicing soon. He might want to give himself an hour just to take the stairs, very slowly.

  9. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough June 11, 2023 / 11:36

    I’m picturing medics rushing to the belfry and carrying him down on a stretcher. Wouldn’t that be a fun way down!

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