…for Friday Fictioneers which is hosted By Rochelle.
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That’s him, his back turned as if he doesn’t know her. They’re in it together. That bulge in his pants? I know that look, it’s a Glock 47.
Now look. She’s touching up her makeup, but it’s not her cheeks she’s looking at, it’s the reflection in the mirror.
That couple, there, chatting over their strawberry milkshakes, they’re not as innocent as they look.
A nod from the bartender and I’ll make my first move.
“Excuse me sir … sir? What would you like?”
“Sorry, I was miles away. Erm, a cappuccino, shaken not stirred”.
“Are you sure you’re okay sir?”‘
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Dear Keith,
Yes, but does he have a license to kill? Thank you Ms Moneypenny for an intriguing story. Just remember, sometimes a milkshake is just a milkshake. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
hi Rochelle! He certainly does – but only in his dreams, for he’s the man with the golden smoothie!
A day dream spoiled by the waiter 😂
What a spoil-sport!
Yeah! Don’t tip him. 😂
Who’s to say his first take wasn’t right?
That would be quite a surprise!
It is dangerous when an author/daydreamer (same thing…) sits alone in a cafe…
Tell me about it, it’s something I do often!
I understand completely…
Liked this Keith.
I’m pleased! Thanks, Di.
Haha! My kind of story, Keith. I lovd this. And your reading of it…spot on…double “O” seven!!
KInd of you to say so, Suzette!
Fun story with just the right amount of whimsy.
Typical of OO7.
I’m pleased it came across that way! Thanks so much, Dawn!
Anything can happen…)
So true!
Those with fertile imaginations have a ton more fun than those who don’t. Wonderful storytelling, Keith, as usual.
That’s what I always tell myself! Thanks for loaning us your photograph, Lisa.
You’re very welcome, Keith.
Walter Mitty’s cousin, perhaps?
You may have a point, Mimi!
Loved this moment day dreaming in the Fleming Coffee house. She will come over to him and ask to sit.
“Sorry, Miss Galore you have mistaken me for my brother. I am Basildon Bond, not James.”
“Good try James, your tuxedo says otherwise.”
Great fun story.
Brilliant, James! A perfect start to part two if there was to be one!
*I wonder if they still produce that writing paper!
Established in 1911 by Millington & sons, then acquired by John Dickinson’s in 1918; Basildon Bond is still the leading brand in Personal Stationery in the UK.
So many secrets hidden in plain sight!
The skill is in spotting them – a bit like an Easter Egg hunt I suppose!
Living the dream. Nice one.
Exactly! Thanks, Sandra.
I’ll bet you’re one of those people-watchers who makes up stories about everyone you see :). Love the ending on this one.
Guilty as charged Linda! Being single means I can take an interest in everyone around me, not just the person sitting opposite me!
I’m. mot single, but any time I’m alone and waiting, I’m people-watching and story-making 🙂
It’s fun that I was listening to Frank Sinatra while reading this. His voice really set the mood. The last line made me laugh. Obviously, the waitress didn’t realize the coffee drinker was a writer whose mind was running wild.
A perfect accompaniment! She may now appear in his story!
i guess back to reality before everything gets messy. 🙂
Hopefully! Cheers plaridel.
Such great imagination …I was half expecting Rosa Klebb to make an appearance or Jaws – made me smile 😁
Thanks, Angela. I imagine he was too!
Five stars on this one, Keith. You can never trust those other patrons. Each has a motive. Be especially wary of those who drink their coffee black with a double-shot of espresso.
Oh dear, between you and me, I’m known to drink my coffee like that!
Sounds like he has his films mixed up. Good job.
Thanks, he’s certainly mixed up!
Reminds me of Simon & Garfunkel. “I say his bowtie is really a camera.”
He probably wished he had one! Cheers, Liam.
His muse was working and he was inspired, until interrupted that is. Nicely done, Keith! 🙂
Indeed, there’s nothing worse! Thanks, Brenda.