One hundred words …

For Friday Fictioneers where our host with the most is Rochelle!

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My grandfather had a beautiful violin. He used to stand in the garden and play; birds would sing along as the melody drifted up and down, round and round. 

He caught me fiddling with it once and was not best pleased. ‘One day it will be yours’ he said, ‘but for now, it’s mine and mine alone’.

As the years went by I became more and more passionate about violin music, so when Grandpa passed, my dream of owning his precious instrument came true. 

Now I stand in the garden where he once stood.

Screech…screech…screech……

If only I’d had lessons!

 

*If you listen to the audio you’ll see, or rather hear what I mean!

 

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55 thoughts on “One hundred words …

  1. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly March 29, 2023 / 16:25

    Yes, if only it was that easy – wish I had stuck at my piano lessons all those years ago!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 29, 2023 / 16:35

      It’s funny you should mention that Iain, I hated my piano teacher. She’d rap my knuckles with the edge of a ruler when I made mistakes, so I refused to carry on. Watching The Piano on TV recently reminded me how much I wish I’d carried on.

      • Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly March 29, 2023 / 16:49

        Same thing Keith – without the knuckle rapping, but I hated it and now wish i had stuck at it!

  2. beth's avatar beth March 29, 2023 / 17:03

    Oh, that!

  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje March 29, 2023 / 17:10

    Haha! You’ve ended an emotional story with a humorous twist

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 30, 2023 / 15:00

      I can only remain emotional for a short time, Sadje!

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje March 30, 2023 / 16:53

        I think that’s a good thing.

  4. trentpmcd's avatar trentpmcd March 29, 2023 / 17:15

    I blame grandpa – he should have been driving him to those violin lessons…

  5. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan March 29, 2023 / 20:37

    I don’t think Grandpa understood the desire or passion of his Grandson to learn and play. Get them interested young and keep them inspired. I suspect he doesn’t need to feed the birds any more. A fine chuckle at the end.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 30, 2023 / 15:44

      Absolutely James. I’m delighted to have amused you!

  6. Dawn M. Miller's avatar Dawn M. Miller March 30, 2023 / 00:52

    Oh snap…yes, lessons would have helped!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 30, 2023 / 16:07

      I’m terribly sorry about that Tracey, I’ll try to make it up to you with my next effort!

  7. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough March 30, 2023 / 03:56

    Well, the crows may enjoy that melody. 🙂
    Lovely mini-tale as always.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 30, 2023 / 16:12

      They make a very similar noise! Thanks, Christine.

      • Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough March 30, 2023 / 17:23

        Oh well, practice makes perfect, right? Ear plugs work, too. 🙂
        You should hear our magpies: they sound like squealing pigs.

  8. The Sicilian Storyteller's avatar The Sicilian Storyteller March 30, 2023 / 11:54

    To those who choose to only read this story and skip the audio, you don’t know what you’re missing today! 😂

    I am reminded of countless of grade school recitals sitting in the audience gritting my teeth while some 7-year-old screeched his way through “Flight of the Bumblebee”. The only ones in flight were the people in the audience!

    Good one, Keith!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 30, 2023 / 16:58

      I hope the audio didn’t damage your ears! As for the Bumblebee, very few adults can do that justice!

      • The Sicilian Storyteller's avatar The Sicilian Storyteller March 30, 2023 / 22:12

        My grand kids are always sending me crazy stuff so I’ve learned to start out with my speakers on low.

  9. Patricia's avatar Patricia March 30, 2023 / 12:24

    I took piano lessons for a couple of months until I talked my mother into letting take tap dancing lessons instead. Shoulda stuck with piano.

  10. Natasha's avatar Natasha March 30, 2023 / 12:34

    Ha! Ha! The audio had me in splits. And that cold hasn’t gone yet has it? Take care, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 30, 2023 / 17:14

      Almost gone but not quite! Delighted to have split you, Natasha!

  11. Bill's avatar Bill March 30, 2023 / 21:02

    I should have seen that one coming.

    The only thing I can do musically is appreciate it (to the degree my hearing loss allows) and those who can.

    Such talent seems to develop (form) during the young years.

    Well done and funny audio, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 31, 2023 / 17:18

      At least you can appreciate it, I feel sorry for those that don’t. Thanks so much, Bill.

  12. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff March 30, 2023 / 21:29

    Dear Keith,

    Violin is my favorite instrument. Strings. I love ’em! Blue grass fiddle. Classical violin. I love them both.
    Too bad the grandfather in the story didn’t spring for lessons for his grandson. Ooh that screech.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 31, 2023 / 17:26

      I love it too, whatever the musical genre. I hope your ears have recovered!

  13. creatingahome's avatar creatingahome March 30, 2023 / 23:26

    He got caught in he dream and forgot reality

  14. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner March 31, 2023 / 15:28

    Hehe, that’s how I can play too. Good thing grandpa can’t hear it.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 31, 2023 / 17:36

      Me too, as my audio demonstrates! If he can hear him he’ll be regretting not giving him lessons.

  15. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta March 31, 2023 / 15:50

    Haha your audio made me laugh, I think you should keep trying – practise makes perfect – or so they say 😂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 31, 2023 / 17:37

      Thanks for your encouraging words Angela, watch this space!

  16. plaridel's avatar plaridel March 31, 2023 / 17:18

    i guess it’s not too late to get lessons. even old cows can learn new tricks. 🙂

  17. Alicia Jamtaas's avatar Alicia Jamtaas March 31, 2023 / 21:28

    My mother played the castanets. Because I didn’t pay attention (and thought it quite odd), I never learned. Great story.

  18. Liz Young's avatar Liz Young April 1, 2023 / 16:49

    Grandpa should have encouraged him more to learn.

  19. Brenda's avatar Brenda April 2, 2023 / 05:08

    Aw, if only he had thought ahead or had some help. He has the instrument but not the skill. I loved the ending, Keith!

  20. granonine's avatar granonine April 2, 2023 / 15:37

    What a disappointment. But–it’s never too late to take those lessons!

  21. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli April 4, 2023 / 00:46

    Keith, they say keep your eyes on the prize, but the young lad should have kept his ears on it. Hilarious conclusion and perfect sound effect.

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