It’s a sixa!

for Six Sentence Stories where the given word is Blur. 

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There was nothing much of interest in the local newspaper until that was, he saw the result of a football match which he thought wasn’t happening until this Saturday.

The weather forecast seemed odd too. 

It was the longest period of wet weather he could remember, yet it said ‘the current spell of unseasonably warm and sunny weather is set to continue’.

Then on the obituary page, he saw a photograph that made him stop dead, he was looking at a tribute to himself.

The words started spinning and everything around him became a blur except for the date at the top of the page which came into sharp focus.

He was reading next week’s paper.

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Thanks to Denise at GirlieOnTheEdge for hosting.

33 thoughts on “It’s a sixa!

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje February 2, 2023 / 09:31

    Very intriguing story Keith

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje February 3, 2023 / 12:25

        You’re welcome

  2. Spira's avatar Spira February 2, 2023 / 10:14

    Tell you what, Keith:
    When me and Ford staged ” my death” at the SSC&B there was a point when Ford emailed me: You better not die this week…and definitely not the way I wrote in my Six!😆

    What’s the song…They thought I dodged a bullet but I was the one with the gun!

    Excellent Six, Keith!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 3, 2023 / 11:23

      Even if you had died I am sure you’d have found a way to resurrect yourself, stranger things have happened at the SSC&B! Thanks, Nick.

  3. Dawn's avatar Dawn February 2, 2023 / 11:17

    Well, yikes! Not sure I’d want to see that paper…..💞

  4. beth's avatar beth February 2, 2023 / 11:28

    wow! great twist

  5. imnobodywhoareyou's avatar imnobodywhoareyou February 2, 2023 / 16:12

    A very haunting experience for poor old Gerry, too be sure.

  6. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny February 2, 2023 / 18:31

    Nice description of the premonition. I like the wavy text in the obituary.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 3, 2023 / 12:03

      Thanks, Frank, the obituary took longer to produce than the story!

  7. The Atomic Mage's avatar The Atomic Mage February 2, 2023 / 18:34

    Oof, Keith, that was a tale that made my stomach take a lurch – but in a good way of course! Bravo.

    Spira is right in his comment to point out: “When me and Ford staged ” my death” at the SSC&B there was a point when Ford emailed me: You better not die this week…and definitely not the way I wrote in my Six!”

    So true, writing about death then hoping it doesn’t actually happen lol. I like your crumpled-up newspaper obituary too. And I wonder what the funeral song will be… (has he got time to change his tune?)

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 3, 2023 / 12:24

      Having just written about death, I’m in total agreement! He can change the tune, after all, where there’s a will there’s a way – assuming of course he wrote a will!

  8. Patricia's avatar Patricia February 2, 2023 / 19:35

    That would be a downer!

  9. clark's avatar clark February 2, 2023 / 19:51

    that’s one way to guarantee the turnout for next week’s Six!

    lol

  10. The Sicilian Storyteller's avatar The Sicilian Storyteller February 2, 2023 / 21:32

    Better cancel your newspaper subscription now while you still have the time!

  11. dorahak's avatar dorahak February 3, 2023 / 00:10

    A time-traveling newspaper!! I’m not sure I’d be down with that. Today’s troubles are enough without borrowing tomorrow’s. Great Six, Keith.

  12. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough February 3, 2023 / 05:47

    A bit like the Ghost of Christmas Future pointing Ebenezer Scrooge to his tombstone. Would leaving the country help?

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 3, 2023 / 13:28

      Now you come to mention it! That’s certainly an idea.

  13. Gr8BigFun's avatar Gr8BigFun February 3, 2023 / 19:33

    It’s gotta suck getting all that inside information but not being able to place the bet to go with it!

  14. Astrid's avatar Astrid February 3, 2023 / 21:40

    Awesome tale! I saw the twist coming but still, it felt quite chilling.

  15. D. Avery @shiftnshake's avatar D. Avery @shiftnshake February 4, 2023 / 00:35

    “he saw a photograph that made him stop dead” Overkill? Naw. A fun, well done twist!

  16. Tom's avatar Tom February 4, 2023 / 14:29

    A nice twist, Keith… or an unfortunate one, depending on the point of view! 🙂

  17. Liz H's avatar Liz H February 4, 2023 / 19:03

    Choice!!
    Rod Serling would be proud of you. Or maybe this is an Xfile!

  18. Nicole Horlings's avatar Nicole Horlings February 12, 2023 / 18:01

    Oh boy! That’s quite the set of realizations. Great Six, Keith!

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