A hundred words …

for Friday Fictioneers.

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I asked Bob why he didn’t sweep his steps. He said he likes to keep it that way to remind him of all the wonderful things he’s done of late.

“The popcorn bag’s from when I watched an amazing movie,  that receipt’s from a fabulous shopping trip, the bottle top is from a very tasty tipple and the autumn leaves remind me of my favourite season”.

“You’re talking garbage,” I said.

“Worth a try” he laughed, “I’ll sweep it up … and down!”

He was glad he did because he uncovered the winning lotto ticket he lost the other day!

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stepsThanks to Rochelle for hosting and to Roger Bultot for the picture. 

 

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73 thoughts on “A hundred words …

  1. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon January 4, 2023 / 12:53

    He should have left it there to remind him how lucky he is

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje January 4, 2023 / 13:01

    Good for him

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje January 4, 2023 / 17:04

        👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

  3. Sandra's avatar Sandra January 4, 2023 / 13:18

    Silver linings… all of them.

  4. Sandra's avatar Sandra January 4, 2023 / 13:19

    Lost my earlier comment. Or did I? Anyway, silver linings everywhere.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 5, 2023 / 09:59

      No Sandra, for some peculiar reason yours and Plaridel’s comments always land in my spam tray, but fear not, it’s the first thing I check every day!

  5. beth's avatar beth January 4, 2023 / 14:59

    So cute and funny

  6. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz January 4, 2023 / 16:05

    Ha ha ha! Nice one, Keith 🙂

  7. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly January 4, 2023 / 16:19

    A perfect find for the new year! All the best for 2023 Keith

  8. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan January 4, 2023 / 19:54

    It is all in the wind, you never know what will blow onto your steps. A winning lottery ticket, now what’s the chances!

  9. athling2001's avatar athling2001 January 4, 2023 / 21:21

    Lucky him. Seems he is luckier than he realized.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 5, 2023 / 14:21

      If it wasn’t for my encouragement he’d never have found it!

  10. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff January 4, 2023 / 21:23

    Dear Keith,

    I looking at the clutter on my desk wondering what I might find if I tidy it up. Good for Bob and the lotto ticket. (Pretty sure I dono’t have one of those.)

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 5, 2023 / 14:23

      It’s amazing what you find during a good tidy! I don’t do the lotto either so it’s a no-no for me too!

  11. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli January 4, 2023 / 21:28

    Bob’s a good spin doctor. You always leave me smiling, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 5, 2023 / 14:24

      Thanks so much, Lisa, mission accomplished it seems!

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli January 5, 2023 / 19:26

        🙂

  12. Tannille's avatar Tannille January 5, 2023 / 04:57

    No more sweeping for Bob! Now if only I were that lucy…

  13. Dawn's avatar Dawn January 5, 2023 / 11:42

    Awesome twist at the end! I wish my cleaning projects netted such a win! 💞💞💞

  14. Bill's avatar Bill January 5, 2023 / 14:44

    A rewarding discovery, but I otherwise appreciate his sense of humor. 🙂

  15. Liz Young's avatar Liz Young January 5, 2023 / 15:27

    Why on earth didn’t he look for that ticket earlier?!

  16. granonine's avatar granonine January 5, 2023 / 17:21

    I think. I’m the only one who saw these as uprights rather than stairs. Something’s wrong with my perception!

    Anyway, good one–I love the ending 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 6, 2023 / 11:15

      Thanks so much, Linda. Maybe you saw them correctly and we all got it wrong!

      • granonine's avatar granonine January 6, 2023 / 15:56

        UMMmmmmm–no. All I can see now is the stairs 🙂

  17. authorfleurl's avatar authorfleurl January 6, 2023 / 03:54

    That’s the kind of cleanup I love, finding a lotto ticket is the cherry on top! Great story 🙂

  18. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta January 6, 2023 / 13:16

    Good old Bob – no more sweeping up for him me thinks 🙂

  19. plaridel's avatar plaridel January 6, 2023 / 17:51

    you’d never know, sometimes you get lucky 🙂

  20. CGraith's avatar CGraith January 7, 2023 / 01:29

    A fun conversation, not at all predictable.

  21. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner January 8, 2023 / 20:49

    I wonder why everyone sweeps their stairs all of a sudden? They must have read your story.😁

  22. Michael's avatar Michael January 8, 2023 / 22:27

    I enjoyed this. By the way… is there any cash available🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 10, 2023 / 14:36

      If I’d seen your request yesterday you might have been in luck. Sorry!

  23. D. Avery @shiftnshake's avatar D. Avery @shiftnshake January 9, 2023 / 00:10

    Good one! Such a rich ending. Loved “You’re talking garbage”

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 10, 2023 / 14:42

      Thanks so much – I hope that’s not a comment on my writing!

      • D. Avery @shiftnshake's avatar D. Avery @shiftnshake January 10, 2023 / 16:18

        Your writing is a treasure and I assume that line was intentional word play.

  24. dorahak's avatar dorahak January 9, 2023 / 02:46

    Some folks just can’t lose!

  25. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell January 9, 2023 / 05:34

    Oh this is clever. What is one man’s trash is another’s treasure, or buried treasure at least. Nicely done.

  26. susanrouchard's avatar susanrouchard January 10, 2023 / 11:33

    Thank you Keith , always the lifting cheer in your writing. All the best for the coming year.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 10, 2023 / 14:52

      That’s kind of you to say so, thanks so much Susan.

  27. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda January 10, 2023 / 20:47

    I have me a sudden urge to sweep! 😉

  28. Patricia Clair's avatar Patricia Clair January 10, 2023 / 23:44

    One person’s garbage is another person’s memories…nicely done (and I’m hoping when I clean up this evening I’ll find the winning Mega Millions ticket!)

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