fun fun fun!

For Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Jamboree.

Last night I went to the Party in the Park, part of my town’s annual carnival week. Today will see the procession wind its way through the streets. On Tuesday I’ll be posting pictures of the entire event!

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Closer, louder, closer, louder, and here I am! 

People here, there, everywhere. A thumping beat draws my gaze. A band leaps, yells, carries along a waving crowd.

A smell temps my tastebuds. Sizzling burgers, sugary doughnuts. I grab a beer then mingle.

In the funfair, gaudy machines spin, climb, swoop, soar. Kids laugh, scream. Here ghost train there, there a slide.

The hiss, bang, dazzle, and crackle of fireworks bring the evening to a close. Home beckons. 

Closer, quieter, closer, quieter, and here I am.

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30 thoughts on “fun fun fun!

  1. beth's avatar beth July 30, 2022 / 12:38

    It sounds really fun!

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje July 30, 2022 / 13:16

    You’ve created a visual which is very enticing.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje July 31, 2022 / 13:29

        👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

  3. Leyde Ryan's avatar Leyde Ryan July 30, 2022 / 13:22

    Sounds like a good time!

  4. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin July 30, 2022 / 13:38

    Wonderful sensory delights. I enjoyed the read very much!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 31, 2022 / 13:01

      I could have done with 186 words to fully give it justice!

      • Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin July 31, 2022 / 14:19

        Awesome! It is so fun to grapple with the parameters of a prompt. Welll done !

  5. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda July 30, 2022 / 15:29

    Woohoo for a good time! May I have some cotton candy, a candied apple, and a funnel cake? I promise to eat those AFTER the merry go round … 😉

  6. writingwhatnots's avatar writingwhatnots July 30, 2022 / 17:15

    Oh those fairground smells never cease to tempt! Love the visuals here.

  7. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta July 30, 2022 / 18:26

    I am right there with you….pass me a doughnut 🙂

      • poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta July 31, 2022 / 14:29

        Oh no I’ll have to have have another chocolate biscuit 🙂

  8. Prior...'s avatar Prior... July 31, 2022 / 13:37

    You really let us feel the joy of what a local carnival can feel like – and this is why we have them aprons the world eh?
    The community and joy so we can “spin, climb, swoop, soar”

  9. Bill's avatar Bill July 31, 2022 / 16:36

    You certainly captured the experience, Keith. Well done.

  10. Dale's avatar Dale August 1, 2022 / 13:28

    There is something about a local carnival that beats the standard amusement park. You’ve captured this so brilliantly!

      • Dale's avatar Dale August 3, 2022 / 14:21

        🙂

  11. ~just a thought's avatar ~just a thought August 1, 2022 / 20:31

    You’ve brought excitement and inspiration to get out have fun with the ultimate prize: home again. A wonderful day!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 3, 2022 / 14:13

      Thank you, it’s always one of the highlights of my year!

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