for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Return.
.
she sits
stares
no sign of tears
why I ask
she says not a word
I will wait
however long it takes
till she returns
from there
I know not where
.
for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Return.
.
she sits
stares
no sign of tears
why I ask
she says not a word
I will wait
however long it takes
till she returns
from there
I know not where
.
powerful
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Thanks, Beth.
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Happy birthday dear dear Keith.
I would have thought you were taking a day off from writing.😃😃
Celebrate in style and live it up.
Toasting to a marvellous life ahead of good health, well being, love, peace and abundance. 🥂🍻🫶
Live it up my friend!
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Natasha, thank you so much for your kind words and beautiful message. Every day is a writing day for me, I just won’t have time for reading and commenting! Raising my glass to you right now…cheers, and thanks again!
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How marvellous is that!
More power to your gorgeous pen Keith.
Hugs and cheers!✨🫶
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A rare dark and seriously contemplative piece, Keith. Well done.
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Mmmm, not sure what happened there! Cheers, Bill.
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🙂
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Very evocative
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I’m pleased you found it so, thanks, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome
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A lot is said or implied in a few words. Well done.
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I was hoping the message would come across. Thanks, Patricia.
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May she come back soon, drawn by knowing someone cares. Beautifully written.
Wishing you many happy returns of your birthday!
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Thanks – and thanks again, Mimi!
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Oh my, this really got to me–succinctly rich and beautiful, touched with sadness. Bravo.
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Thanks so much.Not my normal style, but I thought I’d have a go!
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You acquitted yourself well, as they say somewhere–I found your words quite moving.
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