18 thoughts on “A few words”

  1. beth's avatar beth July 10, 2022 / 11:45

    powerful

  2. Natasha's avatar Natasha July 10, 2022 / 12:06

    Happy birthday dear dear Keith.
    I would have thought you were taking a day off from writing.😃😃

    Celebrate in style and live it up.
    Toasting to a marvellous life ahead of good health, well being, love, peace and abundance. 🥂🍻🫶

    Live it up my friend!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 10, 2022 / 18:19

      Natasha, thank you so much for your kind words and beautiful message. Every day is a writing day for me, I just won’t have time for reading and commenting! Raising my glass to you right now…cheers, and thanks again!

      • Natasha's avatar Natasha July 10, 2022 / 18:32

        How marvellous is that!

        More power to your gorgeous pen Keith.

        Hugs and cheers!✨🫶

  3. Bill's avatar Bill July 10, 2022 / 12:35

    A rare dark and seriously contemplative piece, Keith. Well done.

      • Bill's avatar Bill July 11, 2022 / 17:03

        🙂

  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje July 10, 2022 / 12:58

    Very evocative

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje July 11, 2022 / 14:43

        You’re most welcome

  5. Patricia's avatar Patricia July 10, 2022 / 20:51

    A lot is said or implied in a few words. Well done.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 11, 2022 / 14:09

      I was hoping the message would come across. Thanks, Patricia.

  6. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings July 10, 2022 / 23:37

    May she come back soon, drawn by knowing someone cares. Beautifully written.

    Wishing you many happy returns of your birthday!

  7. Staarlz's avatar Staarlz July 11, 2022 / 03:29

    Oh my, this really got to me–succinctly rich and beautiful, touched with sadness. Bravo.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 11, 2022 / 14:11

      Thanks so much.Not my normal style, but I thought I’d have a go!

      • Staarlz's avatar Staarlz July 11, 2022 / 20:22

        You acquitted yourself well, as they say somewhere–I found your words quite moving.

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