Thirty-six words

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Recipe and the limit, just 36 words.

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My voluptuous recipe would delight, excite, and stimulate her I felt sure.

She took a bite, closed her eyes.  Juices trickled down her chin.  A ménage à troi of flavours frolicked within.

 

Then she was sick.

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35 thoughts on “Thirty-six words

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje February 19, 2022 / 14:12

    I’m sure she fainted with the delight of the flavor

  2. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz February 19, 2022 / 15:08

    Ha ha ha ha ha!!! Oh, Keith! Better out than in 😀 😀 And yet in all the great romances ever told, there’s always blunders aplenty before they finally get it together so I’m sure this was the prelude to something special! 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 19, 2022 / 15:53

      A prelude to ordering a take-out probably! Deighted to have amused you Sunra.

      • Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz February 20, 2022 / 02:08

        Ha ha! Or a stiff G&T and a lie-down! You always do, Keith 🙂

  3. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough February 19, 2022 / 15:42

    “The best laid plans…” to quote a bard of yesteryear.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 19, 2022 / 15:49

      As another bard should have said, “if food be the music of love, play on, don’t eat it”!

  4. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb February 19, 2022 / 16:39

    Oh yugh Keith … poor woman – or you if you have to clear up … cheers Hilary

  5. Michael B. Fishman's avatar Michael B. Fishman February 19, 2022 / 22:35

    This little mini story took me in two possible directions. I’ll go with the direction that you accidentally poisoned her?! Back to the kitchen, Keith! 🙂

  6. Fandango's avatar Fandango February 19, 2022 / 23:32

    Bummer. Back to the drawing board.

  7. Bill's avatar Bill February 20, 2022 / 15:16

    Not a happy moment. Enough embarrassment enough for everyone. Cute, Keith.

      • Bill's avatar Bill February 20, 2022 / 17:34

        🙂 Cheers your way, Keith.

  8. Dale's avatar Dale February 20, 2022 / 18:57

    Oh damn. You just had to ruin it, didn’t you?

  9. Dee Min's avatar Dee Min February 20, 2022 / 21:02

    This is sooo good. Then she was sick!!! Priceless ending.

  10. Natasha's avatar Natasha February 21, 2022 / 10:35

    Pity her plight. 😉

  11. parikhit's avatar parikhit February 23, 2022 / 10:15

    Perhaps she won’t let you cook again 😀

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