Seventy-nine words

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Familiar and the limit, 79 words.

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dark-roast

 

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You seem familiar, sir, your guise fools me not. ‘Tis you that set the fire that fateful day.

Ned still bears the scars. Though pummeled gagged and bound, he writhed free but had not the means to quench the pernicious flames that cruelly robbed him of his dwelling place, his wife, his beloved children.

And now, deplorable sir, the nethermost depths of your repugnant basket are reached. ‘Tis I who’ll strike the final blow; ’tis I.

Take this …. sir!

 

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31 thoughts on “Seventy-nine words

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 4, 2021 / 14:53

      My, you were quick, the ink was hardly dry! Thanks so much.,

      • Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris's avatar Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris December 4, 2021 / 14:56

        Phone in hand as I was editing my own! Plus, eyes are always hungry for new words to read and stories to digest! Best breakfast in the world! 😉

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje December 4, 2021 / 15:50

    Still respectful as he extract his rightful vengeance! Great story Keith

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje December 4, 2021 / 16:39

        Just like you! You’re welcome

  2. Bill's avatar Bill December 4, 2021 / 19:52

    Oh, Keith. It is an absolute must to hear you read this. Excellent!

  3. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz December 4, 2021 / 22:06

    I think he deserved more than a smack! Well-read, Keith! And well-penned. I say, rather dark for you! Excellent use of the prompt word 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 5, 2021 / 16:54

      Don’t worry, that was just the start! Thanks for your kind words, Sunra.

  4. dorahak's avatar dorahak December 5, 2021 / 01:56

    Great manners but with deadly intent: vengeance! Entertaining as usual, Keith,
    Pax,
    Dora

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 5, 2021 / 17:01

      And he got it, and more to follow! Thanks, Mimi.

  5. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb December 5, 2021 / 10:00

    Well done Keith – just hope the blows (and I hope there were blows) were fatal. Well done on the prompt … cheers Hilary

  6. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner December 5, 2021 / 10:28

    This is great, revenge with style. In this day and age it’d probably be, “You!” and “Wham!”

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 5, 2021 / 17:09

      Too right! Gone are the days of the gentlemanly assailant!

  7. Michael B. Fishman's avatar Michael B. Fishman December 5, 2021 / 12:26

    Note to self: never forget one’s manners. I liked this sweet tale of revenge.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 5, 2021 / 17:15

      Indeed, one should not. Delighted to have entertained you kind sir.

  8. Dale's avatar Dale December 6, 2021 / 02:12

    A gentleman through and through! Was fabulous to listen to you read it!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 6, 2021 / 10:42

      Indeed he is! I’m really pleased you liked hearing it Dale, thank you.

      • Dale's avatar Dale December 6, 2021 / 12:01

        Very much so! Only a proper English person could do it so well 😉

  9. Prior...'s avatar Prior... December 7, 2021 / 06:41

    Well done and enjoyed the audio version

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