A short story …

for Friday Fictioneers

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Randy Sorhol is an imaginative artist who sees beauty in ugliness and drama in dullness, but somehow his work doesn’t receive the admiration he feels it deserves.

He created a picture from old eggshells called Only Yolking but it absolutely stank!

He smashed a teapot and produced a piece called Shattered. His wife was shattered too, it once belonged to her great-grandmother!

Some discarded engine parts became an enormous wall hanging called Exhausted.  Some old shoes, Soleful and pile of fishbones, Spineless.

He’s having an exhibition of blank canvasses called A Void. Probably not the best title to attract visitors!

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66 thoughts on “A short story …

  1. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 August 11, 2021 / 14:06

    This was great Keith! Love your sense of humour

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 11, 2021 / 16:17

      They must be related! I followed the link then delved into Google Images and was so pleased I did, his work is stupidly wonderful if that makes sense!

  2. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon August 11, 2021 / 14:30

    If he says he’s an artist, then what he produces is art

  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje August 11, 2021 / 14:35

    Very imaginative titles

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 11, 2021 / 16:19

      They are probably better than the actual creations!

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje August 11, 2021 / 16:20

        😜😂🤣

  4. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough August 11, 2021 / 14:46

    Well punned! Randy has a rare talent for titling his pieces. He could get a job in advertising, a great outlet for such creativity.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 11, 2021 / 16:20

      That’s a thought, I’ll suggest it to him! Thanks, Christine.

  5. Dale's avatar Dale August 11, 2021 / 15:59

    Christine beat me to it. The titles of Randy’s works are great!

      • Dale's avatar Dale August 11, 2021 / 18:02

        Very 😉

  6. Shweta Suresh's avatar Shweta Suresh August 11, 2021 / 16:06

    Lol.. Great take, Keith 😂😂😂

      • Shweta Suresh's avatar Shweta Suresh August 12, 2021 / 06:13

        You’re most welcome 🙂

  7. Mason Bushell's avatar Mason Bushell August 11, 2021 / 18:06

    Some people will make art out of anything! Nice one, Keith/

      • Mason Bushell's avatar Mason Bushell August 12, 2021 / 14:29

        Absolutely. You’re welcome.

  8. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli August 11, 2021 / 19:00

    Light-hearted and clever. You did a nice representation in your graphic of the photo!

  9. Lisa's avatar Lisa August 11, 2021 / 19:27

    The Void may be a hit. A museum in a large CA city had a large purple (just a pale purple) square canvas called “Love in Italy.” That was it, just a pale purple square, rather shiny like a piece of glossy vinyl. At least the title The Void makes sense.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 12, 2021 / 13:22

      That could be where Randy got his idea from! The Void was a far more sensible title than his A Void!

  10. larry trasciatti's avatar larry trasciatti August 11, 2021 / 22:02

    Aah I so remember people from the Avant Garde days of the beat generation…Willoughby Cleary, Alben Shinberg, Mack Pellefac. They were all the rage in Greenwich Village back in my young un days

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 12, 2021 / 13:12

      Randy’s one of the new generation of Avant Gardests! Bring it back I say!

  11. theministryofshrawleywalks's avatar theministryofshrawleywalks August 11, 2021 / 23:19

    Randy sounds quite a character, he should do an exhibition of mushrooms and call it Fun-Gi to attract the hordes

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 12, 2021 / 12:56

      Unfortunately, there’s not much room in the local gallery!

  12. Michael's avatar Michael August 12, 2021 / 00:42

    A story that made me smile, I enjoyed it

  13. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff August 12, 2021 / 00:44

    Dear Keith,

    Randy Sorhol? Love it. Sometimes it seems to me that being a successful artist is a matter having just the right gimmick. Well punned.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 12, 2021 / 11:48

      For many, yes, but you don’t need a gimmick, Rochelle!

      Thank you.

  14. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings August 12, 2021 / 00:58

    Heeheehee! Yep, he sounds like he’s entertaining, but not in the way he wants to be.

  15. Gail M Baugniet's avatar Gail M Baugniet August 12, 2021 / 01:34

    He’s lucky his skull wasn’t shattered like an eggshell when he rearranged the shape of the antique teapot. My favorite is the engine parts called Exhausted. Clever post, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 12, 2021 / 12:31

      It was indeed Gail! Thanks for your cracking comment!

  16. draliman's avatar draliman August 12, 2021 / 08:09

    He was doing so well with the clever names until that last one! Unless it’s a cunning bluff – after all, who can resist doing something that implies they shouldn’t? Fun!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 12, 2021 / 12:10

      A good point, but I suspect he’s no idea what he’s done! Cheers, Ali.

  17. writerravenclaw's avatar writerravenclaw August 12, 2021 / 10:35

    Beauty in ugliness, drama in dullness – loved these lines. Great take on the picture prompt.

  18. Elizabeth Young's avatar Elizabeth Young August 12, 2021 / 15:29

    You have a weird sense of humour – love it!

  19. granonine's avatar granonine August 12, 2021 / 15:44

    Hilarious, Keith. Great word-play 🙂

  20. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 August 12, 2021 / 16:31

    Randy Sorhol indeed! Five smiles out of five for that story, Keith!

  21. athling2001's avatar athling2001 August 12, 2021 / 21:09

    Sounds like he has his own thing going. Good for him. Keep up the good work:)

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 13, 2021 / 12:41

      Oh yes, one of a kind – the only one thank goodness!

  22. Lyn's avatar Lyn August 13, 2021 / 04:58

    Oh dear (much shaking of head here.) I must confess though, this had me chuckling, Keith. 😄

  23. Lorraine's avatar Lorraine August 13, 2021 / 07:10

    “He’s having an exhibition of blank canvasses called A Void. Probably not the best title to attract visitors!” His piece de resistance?
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  24. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan August 13, 2021 / 13:06

    This was brilliant. Mind you if the artist preservers he’ll get one of his creations displayed in the Tate gallery. The sandpit and bucket_’drought’.
    the climate change activist will go ballistic.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 14, 2021 / 10:31

      I’ve seen worse in the Tate Modern! Cheers James.

  25. jenne49's avatar jenne49 August 13, 2021 / 22:48

    Very punny, Keith! I love the way you play with words. And a fun take on the prompt.

  26. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner August 14, 2021 / 19:33

    I love this, too funny. The titles alone are works of art. Only sorry for his wife losing her keepsake.

  27. oneta hayes's avatar oneta hayes August 14, 2021 / 23:40

    Fantastic fun. Very creative with the art titles.

  28. Woman walking Max's avatar Woman walking Max August 16, 2021 / 16:20

    Most witty and amusing, like the word play Keith.

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