Ninety nine words …

for Friday Fictioneers

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He always said he wanted to make a mark; be remembered for something by generations to come.

He made a mark alright, a skid mark along the road as he slid into the back of the car in front.

For generations to come, he’ll be remembered by the family of those whose lives he wrecked.

Today, bunches of flowers mark the spot. The spot where a driver was more interested in the text he was typing than what was happening around him.

Yes, he made a mark, and yes, he’ll be remembered for something by generations to come.

 

liz-young-6Thanks to Rochelle for hosting and to Liz Young for the photo.

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Thanks to Rochelle for hostings and to Liz Young for the picture.

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2b69259ac37e78e449fc02276b5b751bWhen I saw the picture I immediately thought of one of my favourite UK sitcom characters, Edie from Last of the Summer Wine!

“Mother, look what you’ve done”

“It’s your father’s fault, Glenda, he keeps swapping the pedals around”. 

63 thoughts on “Ninety nine words …

  1. Michael's avatar Michael June 2, 2021 / 13:05

    A timely warning, and a sad tale, well told

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 2, 2021 / 16:08

      A warning not heeded by many, unfortunately. Thanks, Michael.

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje June 2, 2021 / 13:07

    Good story, and message

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje June 2, 2021 / 16:47

        You’re welcome Keith

  3. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff June 2, 2021 / 13:17

    Dear Keith,

    Indeed he did leave his mark. Very well told.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  4. Mason Bushell's avatar Mason Bushell June 2, 2021 / 13:25

    A well-written story of caution and warning over driving whilst using a phone.

    P.S I love Last of the Summer Wine too. That car scene is a classic!!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 2, 2021 / 16:31

      Despite now being illegal it still carries on.

      Confession time – I watch a recorded episode of Summer Wine every evening, and I recently spent a few days in Holmfirth where it was filmed!

      • Mason Bushell's avatar Mason Bushell June 2, 2021 / 16:33

        No kidding! I reckon they should start impounding technology like they do cars!

        And why not. DOn;t let anybody tell you watching something is silly. If you enjoy it, you enjoy it, my friend! How cool to actually go to the filming location too.

  5. Shweta Suresh's avatar Shweta Suresh June 2, 2021 / 14:11

    Oops. That is one huge mark indeed. Very sad though. Great take on the prompt, Keith.

      • Shweta Suresh's avatar Shweta Suresh June 2, 2021 / 18:48

        Most certainly. That was not the mark he had in mind! Great take, Keith. If only there weren’t any reckless drivers.

  6. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli June 2, 2021 / 15:47

    Thoughtful, full of reproach, and rightfully so! Texting and driving don’t mix.

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli June 2, 2021 / 17:08

        You’re welcome.

  7. Tessa's avatar Tessa June 2, 2021 / 16:05

    How sad and a warning to all of those texters out there that think they know what they are doing.

  8. granonine's avatar granonine June 2, 2021 / 16:08

    I have a friend who keeps her phone on her knee as she drives. One of these days. . . .

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 2, 2021 / 16:55

      Oooh, naughty friend! Not a good idea. Cheers Linda.

  9. Bernadette Braganza's avatar Bernadette Braganza June 2, 2021 / 16:31

    A sad story. More people need to pay attention (literally & metaphorically).

  10. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb June 2, 2021 / 17:13

    Gosh I read the story before I saw the picture prompt – I haven’t seen that Last of the Summer Wine clip … I was down south when that was on … but I’ve seen a few clips recently – needs must … the tv is on! I think I’ll take the laughing one … all the best – Hilary

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 3, 2021 / 11:14

      I watch an episode every night! They don’t make comedy like that anymore!

  11. Dale's avatar Dale June 2, 2021 / 18:18

    A story for our times, Keith. What a way to be known.. To have to live with that for the rest of his life.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 3, 2021 / 11:06

      Indeed, but he brought it upon himself. Cheers Dale.

      • Dale's avatar Dale June 3, 2021 / 12:23

        Very true.

  12. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug June 2, 2021 / 20:29

    Technology makes our lives better in so many ways and worse in so many others. Everybody thinks it can’t happen to them until…

  13. plaridel's avatar plaridel June 2, 2021 / 22:08

    it used to be, don’t drink and drive. now don’t text and drive. still, a good rule to follow.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 3, 2021 / 10:55

      Unfortunately, some people feel that rules are there to be broken. Cheers, plaridel.

  14. earthskyair's avatar earthskyair June 3, 2021 / 00:50

    Such a sad, and too believable, story.

  15. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough June 3, 2021 / 02:25

    A sober tale today — and a great reminder to all. It’s so easy to slip into, “I’ll quickly reply…take me only a few seconds,”

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 3, 2021 / 10:53

      Very true Christine. Sadly, a few seconds is all it takes for something dreadful to happen.

  16. jenne49's avatar jenne49 June 3, 2021 / 11:36

    A warning tale, very effectively told.
    I feel the anger.

  17. Elizabeth Young's avatar Elizabeth Young June 3, 2021 / 14:49

    Well told, Keith – I don’t remember that episode of LOTSW, but I can believe it!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 4, 2021 / 08:28

      It ran for 31 years and there were almost 300 episodes but some of my favourites are the ones where when Edie (Thora Hird) blamed her bad driving on her husband fiddling with the controls of her car!

  18. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 June 4, 2021 / 10:24

    Well told, Keith. Concise and powerful. Very effective use of repetition of the word “mark” with its different connotations.

  19. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan June 4, 2021 / 13:05

    Yes, the mobile telephone is the worst all driving distractions, Yet people keep doing the same thing!

  20. draliman's avatar draliman June 4, 2021 / 13:19

    Definitely not the mark he wanted to leave. A tragic and cautionary tale.

  21. The Abject Muse's avatar The Abject Muse June 4, 2021 / 21:39

    Powerful writing with a huge message. Good one!

  22. Tannille's avatar Tannille June 5, 2021 / 05:12

    There are better ways to leave a mark. Phones should be in the back seat. Nothing is that important while driving.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 7, 2021 / 10:09

      Indeed they should Tannille. I’d happily leave mine at home!

  23. Dora's avatar Dora June 5, 2021 / 18:28

    Keith,
    A tragic story unfortunately repeated on a daily basis.Well-told.
    ~🕊Dora

  24. notestowomen's avatar notestowomen June 6, 2021 / 18:06

    Alas, another casualty of distracted driving. A well told and tragic take on the prompt, Keith.

  25. michaelwynnauthor's avatar michaelwynnauthor June 7, 2021 / 18:19

    A sad tale and one close to home for me. I have a friend who will never be the same because someone wanted to chnage their music while driving. Good take Keith

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 9, 2021 / 12:00

      I’m so sorry to hear that Michael. Cars have so many distractions today.

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