Seventy seven words

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Wayward and the limit, 77 words.

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Me, wayward? Maybe. Deceitful, an evildoer? It has been said.

I pressed my .45 to his forehead. 

‘Please, no’ he whimpered. ‘It wasn’t me’.

I believed him but my boss was a sadistic bastard you didn’t argue with. I glanced over my shoulder praying he‘d stand me down. He didn’t.

He nodded, the signal to fire.

Sometimes, disobedience is the honest route. I fired but not at the pitiful victim. No, I turned, then pulled the trigger. 

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31 thoughts on “Seventy seven words

  1. earthskyair's avatar earthskyair May 1, 2021 / 12:46

    Yikes! That’s intense! And absolutely correct, “sometimes disobedience is the honest route.”

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 1, 2021 / 15:47

      After a month of being silly, I thought I’d try something different! Cheers.

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje May 1, 2021 / 13:05

    Great story Keith.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje May 1, 2021 / 16:26

        You’re welcome 😉

  3. jenne49's avatar jenne49 May 1, 2021 / 17:48

    Excellent story. ‘Sometimes disobedience is the honest route.’ Absolutely.

      • jenne49's avatar jenne49 May 2, 2021 / 12:38

        Laughing at that. mine too!

  4. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly May 1, 2021 / 22:51

    Oh, good twist. Quite a change of pace after your month of musical entertainment!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 2, 2021 / 11:11

      A change is as good as a rest, and I needed one after last month! Thanks, Iain.

  5. Dale's avatar Dale May 1, 2021 / 23:57

    Good for him! Great story in so few words!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 2, 2021 / 14:37

      Haha, thanks, Rochelle! I thought I’d aim for something different.

  6. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough May 2, 2021 / 22:30

    Well written and suspenseful. He’ll get about ten years “vacation” to ponder his next career choice.

  7. Dora's avatar Dora May 3, 2021 / 02:54

    Now this is the kind of wayward that we can all root for! A bad guy turned good guy! Suspenseful and fun, Keith. Fantastic graphics. ~ 🕊Dora

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 3, 2021 / 11:44

      Absolutely! Thanks so much for your lovely comment Dora.

  8. notestowomen's avatar notestowomen May 8, 2021 / 17:28

    That was quite a twist in the end. It would have been a tragedy for him to shoot an innocent man.

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