Forty four words

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Yonder and the limit, 44 words.

 

Now this is wierd. This story came into my head whilst I lay in bed this morning, and before I’d seen the prompt. I just had to change ‘over there’ to ‘yonder’!

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ROSEY LARGE BWP‘Look yonder’ I said. ‘Isn’t that, err, Scarlet, Chris and their mum?’

‘That’s not a scarlet chrysanthemum, it’s a red rose’ said Rosey. ‘And why did you call me Yonder?’

‘No Rosey. Scarlet, Chris and  …’

‘Silly me, you’re right. Of course it’s a chrysanthemum!’

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30 thoughts on “Forty four words

  1. Corinne Rodrigues's avatar Corinne Rodrigues March 27, 2021 / 13:54

    Ha ha… love this. Thank you for the smiles you brought this Saturday evening!

  2. Denise's avatar Denise March 27, 2021 / 14:01

    I never think of clever stuff like that when I wake up. Quite clever…and weird.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 27, 2021 / 14:10

      It doesn’t normally happen like that! Cheers Denise

  3. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb March 27, 2021 / 14:22

    Hi Keith – fun … well done – something I’d never have come up with … but I couldn’t spell chrysanth …

    Just enjoy the bulbs – beautiful at the moment … cheers Hilary

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 27, 2021 / 14:26

      Thank goodness for Grammarly spell checker – I didn’t have a clue either! Off for a walk among the dafodils.

  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje March 27, 2021 / 14:38

    Haha! Entertaining post.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje March 27, 2021 / 15:40

        You’re welcome 😉

  5. jenne49's avatar jenne49 March 27, 2021 / 15:19

    Now that made me smile. What a fun play on words. I’m thinking Rosey appears often in your work? I like her!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 27, 2021 / 15:42

      At least 140 times over the past 12 years or so Jenne! She’s delighted to have made your acquaintance!

  6. Dora's avatar Dora March 27, 2021 / 15:44

    Englsih! It’s all Greek to me.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 27, 2021 / 15:47

      Haha, especially Rosey’s English! Στην υγειά σας Dora!

      • Dora's avatar Dora March 27, 2021 / 15:55

        Yep. Cheers to Rosey and to you, Keith!

  7. notestowomen's avatar notestowomen March 27, 2021 / 15:54

    It’s funny, I was thinking of Rosey recently. It’s nice to have her back, getting things all muddled again. Fun read, Keith 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 27, 2021 / 16:08

      She’s usually lurking somewhere in the background! I’m so pleased you liked it, thank you.

      • notestowomen's avatar notestowomen March 27, 2021 / 16:18

        I did 🙂 and you’re welcome.

  8. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly March 27, 2021 / 17:06

    Very clever Keith, raised a smile 🙂

  9. ceayr's avatar ceayr March 27, 2021 / 17:55

    Surely you’re joking!
    (Go for it)
    And I’m not sure which of you is battier, but Rosey is much prettier.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 28, 2021 / 14:40

      She’s driven me batty, and clearly you’ve not seen me when I hit the town!

  10. Dale's avatar Dale March 28, 2021 / 00:49

    Oh that Rosey! So much fun!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 28, 2021 / 14:17

      …in small doses! Thank goodness for the miserly word limit!

      • Dale's avatar Dale March 28, 2021 / 15:17

        I hear you!

  11. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff March 28, 2021 / 14:14

    Dear Keith,

    Does Rosey need hearing aids? Or does she need to pay better attention? Cute story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 28, 2021 / 14:35

      She only half listens so I guess it’s the latter Rochelle!

  12. Susan St.Pierre's avatar Susan St.Pierre March 28, 2021 / 15:55

    Your clever humor is on high power lately. Loving it!

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