28 thoughts on “Fifty one words”

  1. ceayr's avatar ceayr January 30, 2021 / 14:36

    You tell her, Keith!
    If the spirit is strong, the heart will mend.

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  2. Woman walking Max's avatar Woman walking Max January 30, 2021 / 14:46

    A well crafted poem Keith, hope his hearts mends.

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    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 30, 2021 / 14:49

      I think the chances are pretty good! Thanks for dropping by.

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  3. Denise Hammond's avatar Denise Hammond January 30, 2021 / 14:54

    Your romantic side is showing again, lol.

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  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje January 30, 2021 / 16:19

    Fantastic poem!

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      • Sadje's avatar Sadje January 30, 2021 / 17:32

        You’re welcome Keith

  6. Nima Mohan's avatar Nima Mohan January 30, 2021 / 19:01

    Your romantic side too is beautiful 🙂

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      • Nima Mohan's avatar Nima Mohan February 1, 2021 / 03:00

        My absolute pleasute Keith 😃

  7. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 January 30, 2021 / 20:34

    Love that last line about the lock on your soul. Excellent Keith.

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  8. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda January 30, 2021 / 20:41

    Ah, This is LOVELY!
    Fabulously done.
    Beguiling, even … 🙂

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  10. Marja's avatar Marja January 31, 2021 / 04:24

    Great poem I especially love the last line @not the lock on my soul”

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    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 31, 2021 / 13:58

      I couldn’t wish for a nicer comment! Thanks Rochelle.

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  12. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings January 31, 2021 / 23:51

    So well done! It’s a risk to give the key to your heart, but a risk worth taking when the right one comes.

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