A flash of fiction …

Oct 2, 2020Oct 2, 2020Keith's Ramblings

for the Ragtag Daily Prompt where the given word is Wow!

What a dull job. Boring boring boring. I sit in a soulless office performing mind-numbing chores like filing bits of paper in grey boxes. My colleagues think I’m miserable. I seldom smile. Or do I? Little do they know that come nightfall I swap clerking for twerking!

Right, off with my bathrobe and slippers and on with my slinky dress and my highest heels. How do I look? Lipstick not too bright? And how do you like coffered locks? Another wisp of hairspray I think so they stay in place. I wonder what my workmates would say if they saw me now? With a swing of my hips, I’m on my way!

And here we are, my favourite club. The noise, the lights, the people… wow! Oh look, there’s handsome Harry from work chatting up sex-pot Sally from accounts. They called me dreary the other day. I wonder what they’ll make of me now. Move over girl, I’m on my way!

Actually, I need to pop to the loo first. I must remember to go to the ladies room, not the men’s!

Denise D Hammond Oct 2, 2020 / 16:44

Nice twist at the end which I did not see coming.

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- Keith's Ramblings Oct 3, 2020 / 12:36
  
  Gotcha! Cheers Denise.
  
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pensitivity101 Oct 2, 2020 / 17:45

love it Keith.

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- Keith's Ramblings Oct 3, 2020 / 12:35
  
  Thanks Di.
  
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  - pensitivity101 Oct 3, 2020 / 13:22
    
    🙂
    
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Sadje Oct 2, 2020 / 19:12

This is fantastic

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- Keith's Ramblings Oct 3, 2020 / 12:32
  
  Wow, thank you Sadje!
  
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  - Sadje Oct 3, 2020 / 12:49
    
    You’re welcome 😉
    
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messymimi's meanderings Oct 3, 2020 / 02:16

Surprise, surprise. Never judge a book by the cover.

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- Keith's Ramblings Oct 3, 2020 / 12:30
  
  Never! Cheers Mimi.
  
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lifelessons Oct 3, 2020 / 16:46

Ha. Love it, Keith.. but we need a photo!!!! ;o)

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- Keith's Ramblings Oct 3, 2020 / 17:12
  
  Definitely not!
  
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  - lifelessons Oct 3, 2020 / 23:16
    
    Aw c’mon.
    
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  - Keith's Ramblings Oct 5, 2020 / 14:36
    
    NO!
    
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rugby843 Oct 3, 2020 / 20:38

Love it!

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- Keith's Ramblings Oct 5, 2020 / 14:38
  
  Thank you!
  
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lindakempwriter Oct 3, 2020 / 23:20

Brilliant! Love the twist 👏

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- Keith's Ramblings Oct 5, 2020 / 14:36
  
  Thanks so much.
  
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