A few words …

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Jostle and the word limit just 42.

 

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So impatient, Joshua.  Can’t wait, won’t queue.  People in front?  Just push.  That’s Jostler Josh. 

Yesterday someone objected to being shoved and elbowed Joshua in the ribs.  Gave him a crack in his rack!

There was a delay in the emergency room … 

 

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12 thoughts on “A few words …

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje August 16, 2020 / 15:20

    Haha! He got what was coming to him.

  2. Dale's avatar Dale August 16, 2020 / 15:27

    How fitting he could not jostle his way to getting himself fixed!
    Good one, Keith!

      • Dale's avatar Dale August 16, 2020 / 17:47

        🍻

  3. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings August 16, 2020 / 16:38

    Everyone hates to wait, why should he be an exception to the fact that we all have to. Good story!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 16, 2020 / 17:43

      I’ve tried telling him to no avail! Thanks Mimi.

  4. Bill's avatar Bill August 16, 2020 / 18:54

    Dear Sir Keith,

    You write humor, right? Another one. Too funny. Very good! And very just.

    But I must ask, is “a crack in his rack” the same as a kick in the …. ummm …. shin?

    🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 17, 2020 / 11:02

      Haha! No, I was refering to the culinary term, a rack of ribs! Thanks for you lovely comment Bill.

  5. Dee | Grammy's Grid's avatar Dee | Grammy's Grid August 16, 2020 / 20:50

    Impatient people!!

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