A heavenly tale …

for the Ragtag Daily Prompt which is hosted today by Christine.


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action figures Edith VonnegutHonestly, look at this mess. Now listen up!  You cherubs will be the death of me, or someone else if they trip on those toys you’ve abandoned everywhere.

I mean, good folk have made it all the way along the road to eternity,  only to stumble on the stairway to heaven which is littered with your slinkies and action men.  Dying once is bad enough, but falling down the steps and dying again is just not fair.

You know what the Holy Honcho is like.  If he sees this there’ll be hell to pay!  So sort it, NOW!


Picture: Action Figures by Edith Vonnegut

14 thoughts on “A heavenly tale …

  1. Nima Mohan Aug 2, 2020 / 14:25

    Falling down or stumbling upon days is something that happens to me on an everyday basis .. when living with a toddler, who thinks the whole of the floor is road !! 🤣🤣🤣
    Loved it Keith 😄😄

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  2. Christine Goodnough Aug 2, 2020 / 14:50

    Thanks for joining in our prompt today, Keith. I didn’t think “good intentions” led to the stairway to heaven, though. And she needs her white robe. 🙂

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    • Keith's Ramblings Aug 2, 2020 / 15:12

      You are right! I’m getting my heaven and hell back to front! Duly edited out. Actually., I think she looks quite fetching without her robe!

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  3. Stine Writing Aug 3, 2020 / 01:17

    Nice writing. The only things around my house anymore that I trip on are from the dog.

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