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Keith's Ramblings

… for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Keepsake and the limit, 49 words.

 

 

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‘Open your hand’ she whispered

I did as she asked

‘Have this’

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She placed her palm upon mine

‘You’ve given me nothing’ I said

‘Oh, but I have’

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Then she was gone

I know not where

Nor why.

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I treasure that keepsake

A piece of her heart

 within mine

 

whitevvvvvvvvv

 

 

17 thoughts on “.”

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje April 5, 2020 / 16:26

    Poignant.

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  3. ceayr's avatar ceayr April 5, 2020 / 17:01

    Oh you soppy old git!
    How sweet!

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    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings April 6, 2020 / 00:18

      I know. I’m a really romantic person – ask any of my ex-wives!

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  7. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff April 5, 2020 / 19:56

    Dear Keith,

    Such a lovely sentiment. What better keepsake than a piece of another person’s heart.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  9. Kathe W.'s avatar Kathe W. April 6, 2020 / 21:35

    First off I love these new words…some I can actually remember! And then the story was fun and your “Piece of Heart” was poignant and sweet…loved it!
    Cheers and do take care!

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    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings April 7, 2020 / 13:43

      I do have a serious side! Thanks for your good wishes Kathe.

      Reply

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