100 words …

for Friday Fictioneers

 

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I used to love this garden with its swaying trees, smiling flowers, and the calming sound of sprinkling water. 

But now look at it, it’s totally neglected. 

Here in the empty fountain, buried beneath dead leaves are the coins I dropped in all those years ago.  What a fool I was to think my wish would come true.

I’ll gather them up. 

But they are old, soiled and worthless now.  A bit like me.  I may as well throw them back. 

Did I just imagine a splash?  It’s a sign.  I’ll make my wish again and wait a little longer.

 

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img_20200212_122922Thanks to Rochelle for hosting and CEAyr for the photo.

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58 thoughts on “100 words …”

  1. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly March 11, 2020 / 13:30

    Melancholy with just a touch of hope. Nicely done Keith.

  2. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon March 11, 2020 / 13:50

    Perhaps it’s a thing, perhaps just a wishful imagination. Either way, it gives him hope

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 12, 2020 / 10:39

      Probably the latter, but it’s better than giving up! Cheers Neil.

  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje March 11, 2020 / 13:58

    Hope not totally gone!

  4. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough March 11, 2020 / 14:55

    He sounds rather bipolar. 😉
    Well done little tale — and amazing frog.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 12, 2020 / 10:33

      I think you are right! Pleased you liked Froggie – I spent longer on him than I did writing the story”!

  5. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff March 11, 2020 / 15:05

    Dear Keith,

    Hope springs eternal. Cute story. Love the wishing frog.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  6. Sandra's avatar Sandra March 11, 2020 / 15:08

    Never say never. I like the ending of hope.

  7. Dale's avatar Dale March 11, 2020 / 15:43

    Hope goes a long way. I like the never say never feel to this.

  8. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 March 11, 2020 / 16:21

    If your wish don’t come true, change your wish! There’s always time to be happy. There’s always time to be kind.

  9. granonine's avatar granonine March 11, 2020 / 17:02

    From sad to hopeful in a splash 🙂 Well done, Keith.

  10. liz young's avatar liz young March 11, 2020 / 17:09

    Not worn out after all!

  11. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 March 11, 2020 / 17:13

    Forever the optimist. Loved this Keith

  12. larry trasciatti's avatar larry trasciatti March 11, 2020 / 18:30

    Hey there’s never any harm in taking just that one last chance, even during the worst of times

  13. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz March 11, 2020 / 19:52

    Best of luck second time around….

  14. plaridel's avatar plaridel March 12, 2020 / 03:22

    he hopes the longest, to paraphrase jane austen, when all hopes are gone.

  15. ceayr's avatar ceayr March 12, 2020 / 09:51

    If wishes were horses, eh Keith…

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 12, 2020 / 10:24

      …which reminds me, I need to stick a bet on the 3.30 at Cheltenham!

  16. michaelwynnauthor's avatar michaelwynnauthor March 13, 2020 / 09:05

    Never give up, Keith. Where there’s hope and all that.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 13, 2020 / 10:20

      Absolutely, there’s lots of that! Cheers Michael.

  17. draliman's avatar draliman March 13, 2020 / 17:31

    Never lose hope!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 14, 2020 / 09:59

      I’ve mislaid it once or twice, but never lost it! Cheers draliman.

  18. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug March 13, 2020 / 20:36

    It’s that hope that keeps us going.

  19. Dawn M. Miller's avatar Dawn M. Miller March 13, 2020 / 23:02

    As long as you have dreams, you ain’t dead!

  20. Russell's avatar Russell March 14, 2020 / 02:47

    Keeping the hope alive! Nothing wrong with that.

  21. susanmehr's avatar susanmehr March 14, 2020 / 11:47

    As long as you have hope. 🙂

  22. Russell Gayer's avatar Russell Gayer March 14, 2020 / 21:25

    Nice one, Keith. You have to keep believing.

  23. Alicia Jamtaas's avatar Alicia Jamtaas March 15, 2020 / 03:41

    Oh! This is so very good. One of your best, I think.

  24. Tannille's avatar Tannille March 15, 2020 / 04:04

    Gather up all those coins and splurge on something special. 😀

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