A short story …

for Sunday Photo Fiction

 

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I once worked aboard that ferry. I ran the snack bar.  It wasn’t so much the job I enjoyed, it was meeting the people.  Most were going to the island for a holiday. 

I remember the time a tiny hand popped up clutching a plastic bucket and spade.  I bent forward and peered over the counter to see an excited little boy.  ‘I’m going to build sandcastles mister’ he said!

But that wasn’t the main reason I recall that day. 

As I watched as the passengers climb from their cars, I played my usual game with myself;  she’ll ask for an espresso, he’ll want a coke! 

One car just about made it onboard it in time.  It was blue.  A Ford I think.

Soon I was busy serving.  A girl asked me for a glass of water.  She looked agitated.  She took it away then sat with her head in her hands.  I didn’t think any more of it.

When the familiar ‘ding-dong return to your vehicles’ message rang out, off everybody went.  I was clearing my tables when I found that glass of water.  And some keys.  A bag too.

Just one car remained onboard.  It was blue.  A Ford I think.

 

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artur-shipwreckThanks to Donna for hosting. The photo is by Artur Malishkevych

 

18 thoughts on “A short story …

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje February 23, 2020 / 17:12

    A poignant story Keith.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje February 23, 2020 / 17:53

        You’re welcome 😉

  2. Denise Hammond's avatar Denise Hammond February 24, 2020 / 16:00

    Okay. Now on to something more cheerful, I hope.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 24, 2020 / 16:57

      Okay! A blue boat crashed into red boat. What happened to the sailors?

  3. Jen Goldie's avatar Jen Goldie February 24, 2020 / 21:56

    A sad story Keith, but poignant. Perfect take on the photo.

  4. larry trasciatti's avatar larry trasciatti February 26, 2020 / 21:00

    That’s exactly the way I like to see things. Let the fine weather begin

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