A handful of words…

for Friday Fictioneers

 

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“They think they’re clever”.

“Who?”

“Them, they’re watching us”.

“How?”

“CCTV”

“I can’t see any cameras”.

“No?” said Cocpiracy Chris. “That ‘s not a synagogue, it’s an enormous camera” 

Doubting Dave faced the ‘shutter’ and danced a jig.  “Chris thinks you’re a camera”  he sang, sticking up his middle finger and laughing like a hyena!

Suddenly people came running past. “What’s happening?” asked Dave. 

“Don’t know” stammered Chris.  “Go!”

That night, Doubting Dave was watching the TV news when his face and finger appeared on the screen.

‘Police wish to interview this man seen acting suspiciously after a shooting in Rivington Street’,

 

 

rivington-st-shul-roger-bThanks to Rochelle for hosting and to Roger Bultot for the picture.

 

Prod the frog to see what others have come up with!

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58 thoughts on “A handful of words…

  1. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon November 13, 2019 / 14:51

    I liked the idea of the building as a camera

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 14, 2019 / 10:28

      Apparently, in the 1970s the disused synagogue was turned into a studio for artists and photographers which is why the Star of David was changed to resemble a camera shutter. Cheers, Neil.

  2. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 November 13, 2019 / 16:28

    Always understand – they’re watching YOU! Fun story, Keith.

  3. Sandra's avatar Sandra November 13, 2019 / 16:33

    Try getting out of that one, then. Fun story.

  4. granonine's avatar granonine November 13, 2019 / 17:09

    He left his aluminum foil helmet at home. Otherwise, he wouldn’t have been so foolish 🙂

  5. K.J.'s avatar K.J. November 13, 2019 / 17:21

    I like the interpretation of the photo.

  6. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly November 13, 2019 / 18:35

    Bad luck Dave, I hope he doesn’t end up taking the fall!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 14, 2019 / 10:03

      Don’t worry, I’ll tell the cops it wasn’t him!

  7. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda November 13, 2019 / 19:33

    Didn’t people tell you to keep your hands in your pockets???! (come to think of it, maybe they said “keep your hand where I can see them” or … “keep your hands to yourself” or “hands up”?
    I give up …
    😉
    Na’ama

  8. ceayr's avatar ceayr November 13, 2019 / 21:12

    Looks like Dave’s jig is up!

  9. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli November 14, 2019 / 04:22

    Reminds me of the movie, “Running Man,” where they can use video footage to tell any story they like. Nicely told and I love your dueling frogs today.

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli November 14, 2019 / 21:57

        You’re welcome, Keith.

  10. Dale's avatar Dale November 14, 2019 / 04:31

    Dunno that I would take the chance… but the Dave’s of this world are all over, aren’t they?

  11. draliman's avatar draliman November 14, 2019 / 19:18

    That’s what you get for mucking about in front of a building-sized camera…

  12. plaridel's avatar plaridel November 15, 2019 / 00:24

    back it the day, they went that big? incredible when cameras have gone the other direction nowadays. 🙂

  13. mcswhispers's avatar mcswhispers November 15, 2019 / 13:01

    Great story! Nice pace and mystery!

  14. oneta hayes's avatar oneta hayes November 15, 2019 / 19:11

    “The Eye is on you.” Very novel – building as a giant camera. As I remember you have a stack of “winners” on Friday Fictioneers. You’re good. 😀

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 17, 2019 / 11:09

      Oh, that’s so kind of you! Writing for Friday Fictioneers is the highlight of my week.

  15. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan November 15, 2019 / 20:49

    A serious piece of comedy. Although I suspect this CCTV camera is covering the near Galaxy and not just the pimples on Dave’s face.

  16. Inside the Mind of Isadora's avatar Inside the Mind of Isadora November 16, 2019 / 00:14

    Somebody’s watching YOU … YUP!!!
    Fun way to use the prompt this week, Keith.
    Great story …
    Isadora 😎

  17. Tannille's avatar Tannille November 16, 2019 / 03:54

    Don’t tempt fate. Great concept a building being a giant camera. Big Brother is watching you.

  18. magarisa's avatar magarisa November 16, 2019 / 17:10

    There are so many cameras these days (including those on our phones) that it’s safer to assume that one is being filmed.
    Great take on the prompt!

      • magarisa's avatar magarisa November 17, 2019 / 21:47

        Nope! You’re welcome.

  19. Liz Young's avatar Liz Young November 16, 2019 / 17:34

    It isn’t paranoia if they really are watching you!

  20. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings November 16, 2019 / 22:06

    These days, just always assume you are on camera, with phones everywhere, you may be!

  21. mjlstories's avatar mjlstories November 17, 2019 / 12:28

    I love the idea it’s a camera!
    And nice bit of the building’s history. Lots of geometry in a Star of David – two big equilateral triangles or a hexagon and six equilateral triangles? Depends on your point of view.
    We visited the Camera Obscura Edinburgh and at the end were invited to scope up armies of tiny tourists onto pieces of card. Made walking along the street outside afterwards a whole different experience!
    Never know when someone is watching…

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 17, 2019 / 16:12

      I Googled the synagogue and it’s history, including the Star of David being changed to a shutter-like window, is fascinating. Camera Obscura’s are one of the earliest ‘big brother’ devices. Since childhood I’ve been fascinated by the one near me high up on Eastbourne pier. As you say, you never know!

  22. Lynn Love's avatar Lynn Love November 17, 2019 / 15:55

    It does look like it’s watching! Well written and a great spin on the prompt, Keith

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 17, 2019 / 15:57

      That’s what I thought. Some times things are so big you don’t notice them! Thanks Lynn.

      • Lynn Love's avatar Lynn Love November 17, 2019 / 16:02

        My pleasure 🙂

  23. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg) November 17, 2019 / 19:58

    I would guess that there are CCTV everywhere… soon will be able to buy tickets to CCTV free zones..

  24. Nova's avatar Nova November 17, 2019 / 21:13

    Haha! Wrong place at the wrong time! I love the twist in your story.

  25. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell November 18, 2019 / 19:37

    Oh dear. Wrong place wrong time worst behavior!

  26. Fatima Fakier's avatar Fatima Fakier November 19, 2019 / 10:03

    I can imagine the police interrogation when they catch him. Would be downright hilarious.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2019 / 11:43

      I guess so! I’d like to be a fly on the wall. Cheers Fatima.

  27. Nina Kintz's avatar Nina Kintz November 20, 2019 / 12:47

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