A fistful of words…

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He was always the same.

“Don’t touch, it’s hot” they’d say, then he’d complain about burning himself.  After being warned not to walk on thin ice, he’d moan about being cold as he clambered from the pond. I once advised him against betting on a horse, though that time he had the last laugh when it won!

“I want ‘I’m a Survivor’ played at my funeral’ he once joked!

So it was no surprise when faced with a daubed message prohibiting trespassers he ignored it. We’d begged him not to. 

Yesterday was the first time I’d heard that song at a funeral.

 

trespass_randy_mazie-1Thanks to Rochelle for hosting and to Randy Mazie for the photo.

Prod the frog (gently) to join in the fun.

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67 thoughts on “A fistful of words…

  1. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough August 7, 2019 / 15:56

    I’ve read the quote: “Learn from the mistakes of others. You won’t live long enough to make all of them yourself.” So I will note on my list, Stay out of places where the sign says, “No Trespassing.” 😉

  2. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon August 7, 2019 / 16:12

    He’s bold. Intrepid. But lacking in common sense.

  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje August 7, 2019 / 17:51

    Good story! There are people like that. 😛

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje August 8, 2019 / 13:51

        You’re welcome Keith.

  4. Carole Anne Carr's avatar Carole Anne Carr August 7, 2019 / 22:30

    I am slowly understanding how this works, and it sounds great fun 🤭

  5. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli August 8, 2019 / 03:15

    If any a time to use the expression “he was begging for it” the time is now.

  6. Dale's avatar Dale August 8, 2019 / 04:03

    There are those who must experience things for themselves… no matter the cost!
    Great job on Monsieur Frogue!

      • Dale's avatar Dale August 8, 2019 / 13:47

        Ah la la!!

  7. anuragbakhshi's avatar anuragbakhshi August 8, 2019 / 05:38

    At least he lived life (short though it might have been) on his own terms.

  8. draliman's avatar draliman August 8, 2019 / 08:18

    He lived hard and died hard. Nice one!

  9. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb August 8, 2019 / 08:38

    Hi Keith – a short story with a fistful of words for a man with little sense – ah well he got what he wanted! Cheers Hilary

  10. Clare Hempstead's avatar Clare Hempstead August 8, 2019 / 09:36

    Some people believe they are indestructible!

  11. Sandra's avatar Sandra August 8, 2019 / 11:25

    Pushing the boundaries… for a while at least. Nicely done.

  12. Reena Saxena's avatar Reena Saxena August 8, 2019 / 12:21

    I like the spirit of the man — maybe activities were misguided.

  13. patriciaruthsusan's avatar patriciaruthsusan August 8, 2019 / 12:45

    A good story with a touch of dark humor, Keith. Well written. It’s amazing how people take dangerous chances with the only life they have. —– Suzanne

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 8, 2019 / 13:36

      A lot do, but I’m not one of them! Thanks Suzanne

  14. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 August 8, 2019 / 13:57

    Skilfully written, Keith. I love the last line!

  15. Alice Audrey's avatar Alice Audrey August 8, 2019 / 16:04

    Some people just have to act as a cautionary tale for the rest of us.

  16. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda August 8, 2019 / 16:46

    I know someone JUST like that (though we’re not at the funeral song … yet …).
    Get well wishes to poor Mr. Froggy. …

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 9, 2019 / 09:06

      Some people get a kick out of taking unnecessary risks, including Mr Froggy – not me though! I’ll pass on your get well message.

      • Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda August 9, 2019 / 16:38

        Yep! Some people seek thrills. I find life dramatic enough, thank you very much, without adding to it …
        Best regards to Froggy.

  17. plaridel's avatar plaridel August 8, 2019 / 17:47

    if anything, he lived his life the way he wanted to.

  18. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug August 8, 2019 / 20:06

    On one hand, if one’s too timid, one misses out on life. On the other, if one’s too bold, life could be much shorter than it may be otherwise. Well told.

    That first example is me. “Careful, it’s hot.” “Ow!” “I told you it was hot.” “I know but… Ow!”

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 9, 2019 / 09:02

      I totally agree with you. As for your experience – be careful, you might get hurt!

  19. JoHawkTheWriter's avatar JoHawkTheWriter August 8, 2019 / 21:32

    Looks like he pushed it too far and got his wish.

  20. larry trasciatti's avatar larry trasciatti August 8, 2019 / 21:45

    he never quite knew when to quite pushing his luck

  21. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan August 9, 2019 / 09:59

    Took a chance, and did it his way. I wonder if his spirit will be trespassing somewhere else.

  22. Michael's avatar Michael August 9, 2019 / 11:19

    As they say, it takes all sorts, now if that sign had said Come In,:)

  23. Rowena's avatar Rowena August 9, 2019 / 13:15

    Keith, your character is evidence for the survival of the more cautious. Know a few too many people like this, who are fortunately still around at this point.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 9, 2019 / 13:34

      There has to be a balancing point between cautious (boring) and daring (exciting). Not sure I’ve found it yet though! Thanks, Rowena.

  24. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff August 9, 2019 / 13:33

    Dear Keith,

    There are some people who don’t listen to anyone. Loved the story and the poor frog. 😀

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 9, 2019 / 13:37

      Aren’t there just? Mister Frog was one of them this week! Thanks so much for taking time out to drop by Rochelle.

  25. Denise Hammond's avatar Denise Hammond August 9, 2019 / 17:59

    There’s no shortage of stupid in the world.

  26. Tannille's avatar Tannille August 10, 2019 / 05:28

    Sounds like he lived life…

  27. granonine's avatar granonine August 10, 2019 / 17:54

    Did have secretly have a death wish? Doesn’t seem like much of a survivor to me!

  28. lisarey1990's avatar lisarey1990 August 11, 2019 / 22:20

    He certainly lived … before dying. Nicely done!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 12, 2019 / 08:47

      It certainly wasn’t a dull life! Thanks so much.

  29. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell August 13, 2019 / 21:34

    Humorous but with heart and a touch of sadness at the end. Well told

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