Seventy-four words…

for Weekend Writing Prompt

 

 

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Just above the horizon,

A golden moon glows in the deep blue yonder

midst a scattering of silver stars.

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Staring into infinity,

I  wonder what lies beyond.

The pressures of the day now gone,

I’m at one with myself, at one with my thoughts.

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Heaven puts on a show.

Silver streaks shoot across the sky

Four, five, ten, more.

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Then stillness returns

There is nowhere I’d rather be right now

Nowhere.

 

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Weekend Writing Prompt is hosted by Sammi Cox

13 thoughts on “Seventy-four words…

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 10, 2019 / 13:25

      Quite a few wasted from my original draft though! Cheers Mimi

  1. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff February 10, 2019 / 10:50

    Dear Keith,

    I enjoyed stargazing with you. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  2. Woman walking Max's avatar Woman walking Max February 10, 2019 / 12:54

    You create a reflective mood with your well crafted story.

  3. deborahsdeliberations's avatar deborahsdeliberations February 10, 2019 / 19:53

    Beautifully written, Keith. I felt as if I were there stargazing too, forgetting for one blissful moment, all the cares and worries of life.

  4. emilykarn64's avatar emilykarn64 February 14, 2019 / 16:43

    A good first entry, come aback again.

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