A 100 Word Story

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It’s back again. February. Every year it turns up around the same time. It’s peering at me through the window like a miserable grey demon.

It’s the middle of the day but it’s more like dusk. I can see the sea from here. It’s grey. Rising from the distant horizon the sky is grey, even the seagulls squawking overhead are grey. There’s a blanket of snow. Blankets are meant to keep you warm. Not this one. The only bit of colour I see is a lone daffodil bravely standing there to remind me that spring is waiting just around the corner.

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Thanks once again to Rochelle for hosting, and to Dale Rogerson for this week’s photo.

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96 thoughts on “A 100 Word Story”

  1. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff February 14, 2018 / 11:15

    Dear Keith

    Daffodils are easily confused, aren’t they? Lovely piece as the winter stretches and spring peeks over horizon.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2018 / 17:48

      They are Rochelle, some of mine are in flower and others not even in bud yet!

  2. Varad's avatar Varad February 14, 2018 / 11:17

    A nice ray of hope. Good one, Keith.

  3. Denise's avatar Denise February 14, 2018 / 11:45

    My daffodils are buried deep down under about two feet of snow. Have I mentioned that I hate winter?

  4. Claire Fuller's avatar Claire Fuller February 14, 2018 / 12:09

    I rather like February, but I know I’m pretty much on my own with this. Nice story.

    • ceayr's avatar ceayr February 14, 2018 / 15:25

      I am also somewhat confused by the doom and gloom here, it’s just weather!

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2018 / 18:00

        I challenge you to go outside my door today CE! Never mind, I’ll be in Dubai next week. Yea!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2018 / 18:03

      Probably Claire! I hate Tuesdays, and February is like 28 of them in a row, even worse in leap years!

  5. yarnspinnerr's avatar yarnspinnerr February 14, 2018 / 12:50

    A lovely post full of hope.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2018 / 18:05

      I was hoping it would come over that way! Cheers YS

  6. Jane Dougherty's avatar Jane Dougherty February 14, 2018 / 14:05

    The neighbour has a whole field of daffs. We have four…

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2018 / 18:06

      I have just one! Lot’s of buds though. Thanks Jane

      • Jane Dougherty's avatar Jane Dougherty February 14, 2018 / 20:13

        Four buds. One lonely little daff. They’re all wild though so I can’t really complain.

  7. granonine's avatar granonine February 14, 2018 / 14:08

    A bright yellow hope in all that grey bleakness. Nice.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2018 / 18:09

      They are a welcome sight this time of year.Thanks so much.

  8. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly February 14, 2018 / 14:24

    A reflective piece Keith, that managed to catch my mood perfectly on another freezing cold day!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2018 / 18:12

      Tell me about it! Not too long till spring though. Keep warm Iain

  9. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 February 14, 2018 / 14:48

    I like the yellow beacon of hope you give us. Thank you, Keith!

  10. ceayr's avatar ceayr February 14, 2018 / 15:26

    This made me laugh long before I got to the daffodil.
    It’s winter, get over it!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2018 / 18:18

      Haha! I bet you wouldn’t be laughing if you still lived in Scotland! Cheers mate.!

      • ceayr's avatar ceayr February 14, 2018 / 19:05

        There is some truth in that, Keith, I don’t live here for the hot summers, but for the mild winters. Have a good trip.

      • Dale's avatar Dale February 14, 2018 / 21:49

        Says the one living in the beautiful south of France…

  11. liz young's avatar liz young February 14, 2018 / 15:37

    I get enough gloom about the weather from my OH, thank you! And I saw primroses in the verges at the weekend as well as daffodils.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2018 / 18:20

      I’m only kidding, winter is wonderful (ahem!) I adore primroses, snowdrops too. Thanks Liz

  12. Edith M. Field's avatar Edith M. Field February 14, 2018 / 16:04

    I love the persistence of grey throughout the story and the sudden brightness of the daffodil. Wonderful!

  13. Anna Rymer's avatar Anna Rymer February 14, 2018 / 17:25

    Such wonderful woe – I love it! Even the font of the title is irksome and grey! I love it ‘…peering through the window like a miserable grey demon’. A very accurate observation of February, although I find it a vast improvement on January!

  14. J. E. Kennedy's avatar J. E. Kennedy February 14, 2018 / 18:05

    I love it when the daffodils start appearing. Don’t let February get you down 😉

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 14, 2018 / 18:24

      No, I won’t! Bring on the daffodils I say! Thanks so much.

  15. Dale's avatar Dale February 14, 2018 / 21:50

    February does seem like the longest month, doesn’t it? We’ve been… ahhh… “blessed” with mounds of snow this year. Ain’t gonna see no daffodil for MONTHS!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 08:46

      It certainly does! I’m sure your daffodils are waiting just beneath the surface. I’m heading off to warmer climes next week and when I come back February will be but a memory!

  16. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings February 14, 2018 / 23:34

    Sometimes February is the longest short month on the calendar. Happy Valentine’s Day!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 08:40

      Well put! Thanks for your greeting – my only one this year!

  17. Susan's avatar Susan February 15, 2018 / 02:06

    I am always cheered by the first dash of yellow. It means hope of warmer weather is just around the corner. Well done

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 08:39

      Me too, and despite the lone daf in my piece, they have come out everywhere very early this year, and right now the sun is shining!

      • Susan's avatar Susan February 15, 2018 / 22:22

        75 at my house but 40’s tomorrow. It’s like playing pong with the weather

  18. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts February 15, 2018 / 04:08

    A nice reminder that spring is on its way. Very poetic piece! 🙂

  19. Akshata Ram's avatar Akshata Ram February 15, 2018 / 07:04

    The daffodil is a ray of hope, lovely one Keith. Liked your elaborate descriptions

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 08:36

      Isn’t it just? I’m pleased you liked it Akshata

  20. subroto's avatar subroto February 15, 2018 / 08:04

    Winter? It’s a hot summer right now. Oh wait it is winter in the Northern Hemisphere. At this moment snow sounds pretty good. A nice and reflective piece.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 08:35

      It’s definitely winter time here although we haven’t actually had snow down here on the coast for many a year! Thanks Subroto

  21. anuragbakhshi's avatar anuragbakhshi February 15, 2018 / 09:31

    We finished with our two week quota of winters (mild summer for you) ages ago.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 11:06

      Thanks for reminding me, Anurag! Never mind. I’m flying south next week!

      • anuragbakhshi's avatar anuragbakhshi February 15, 2018 / 11:27

        Ha ha ha. Have fun, and lots of sun 🙂

  22. Vivian Zems's avatar Vivian Zems February 15, 2018 / 12:51

    That lone Daffodil is to stop thoughts of gloom. A glimmer of hope. Please bring some sunshine back from Dubai!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 13:27

      Indeed it is Vivian! I’m taking an extra big bag with me so I can bring plenty back!

      • Vivian Zems's avatar Vivian Zems February 15, 2018 / 15:22

        Oooh, I’m so jealous! My daughter just got back from there. Have fun!

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 23:00

        I can’t wait Vivian – international tennis, a night at the opera and a Duran Duran concert to look forward to!

  23. Rowena's avatar Rowena February 15, 2018 / 13:41

    Being in Australia, I could shovel some of that snow and throw it into my car when I pick the kids up from school. It would be instant puddles. It’s been so hot.
    I love the image of this lone daffodil rising out of the snow. Do daffodils flower in the snow like this? No snow around my way. Only blue skies and a fuming sun.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 13:47

      Early flowering ones do Rowena. Right now all I see from my window is blue sky, but although the sun is smiling at me, it can’t be described as fuming!

      • Rowena's avatar Rowena February 16, 2018 / 14:19

        Do you have blue sky with snow outside? I love that. I’ve experienced that out skiing and it’s just glorious.

  24. Sandra's avatar Sandra February 15, 2018 / 14:06

    At least the days are getting longer. Unlike November, which is my un-favourite.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 14:14

      So true. There is so much to look forward to this time of year.

  25. Lynn Love's avatar Lynn Love February 15, 2018 / 14:10

    What a lovely ode to long, grey winters … and hope lifting with just the hint of sunshine that a daffodil can bring. Very atmospheric writing

      • Lynn Love's avatar Lynn Love February 18, 2018 / 15:28

        My pleasure Keith

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 20:51

      Norma, thanks so much for your kind words. Daffodils are very special, aren’t they?

  26. Alice Audrey's avatar Alice Audrey February 15, 2018 / 15:17

    That’s the tail end of Winter for you. Cold, and gray with just the bare promise of an ending.

  27. larry trasciatti's avatar larry trasciatti February 15, 2018 / 18:07

    That one daffodil always keeps me hanging on. There are only 34 days to go until it’s officially over

  28. Alicia Jamtaas's avatar Alicia Jamtaas February 15, 2018 / 19:36

    Lovely! I can actually see that spot of yellow against the grey. Nicely done, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 15, 2018 / 20:45

      Well ‘spotted’ Alicia! Thanks so much for dropping by.

  29. plaridel's avatar plaridel February 16, 2018 / 02:03

    very nice. it’s something to keep the grey… er, blues away.

  30. Jan Vanek's avatar Jan Vanek February 16, 2018 / 02:34

    Gray, gray, gray and then . . . that lovely yellow. It’s one of the things I miss most about no snow in Dallas–seeing the spring bulbs pop up. And so, I enjoyed your story very much!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 16, 2018 / 08:30

      They are just beginning to appear, so spring must be just around the corner! Thanks so much Jan

  31. draliman's avatar draliman February 16, 2018 / 07:01

    I love the brave little daffodil, standing tall with its promise of warmer days to come 🙂

  32. Moon's avatar Moon February 16, 2018 / 10:35

    Beautifully poetic!
    My short acquaintance with Daffodils is confined to the famous Wordsworth poem. Really like your image of the lone Daffodil and how it is symbolic of bright hope.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 16, 2018 / 10:49

      My little daf is not exactly a host, but I’m sure others will join it soon! Thanks, moon.

  33. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough February 17, 2018 / 01:01

    Enjoyed your little “ray of hope” daffodil, Keith. At -25C we have to contend with cats attracted to the door by the sun in windows, then coming to a dead stop on the thresh-hold and wanting to stand there in the open door to see if the weather warms up any. ☹

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 17, 2018 / 10:23

      I can imagine the scene, Christine! Fortunately, I can’t feel the temperature! Thank You.

  34. mjlstories's avatar mjlstories February 17, 2018 / 11:10

    Shortest month, feels like the longest. Poor old February. But yes there are a few of those daffodils and if those don’t work there might be some left-over Valentine’s chocolates half-price at Tesco Express. I enjoyed your exaggerated gloom – very cheering!
    PS It has been comment mayhem in WordPress World this week. Did you leave me a comment by any chance? I approved a comment which went off into the ether, never to be seen again even by the Akismet Techies.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 17, 2018 / 12:58

      When I went to Tescos yesterday there were a few leftover chocolates and lots of wilting red roses! I did leave a comment and it disappeared. I’ve just tried again!

      • mjlstories's avatar mjlstories February 17, 2018 / 13:10

        Weirdly I lost the comment I left here too – then it reappeared. All’s well that etc etc

  35. Fatima Fakier's avatar Fatima Fakier February 17, 2018 / 11:58

    I’m reading this while the sun burns brightly outside in 30 degree summer. I’m looking for a little cool weather! 🙂 Really good writing here, Keith. Blankets of snow didn’t keep your MC warm, was a nice touch. Lovely ray of hope at the end too.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 17, 2018 / 13:00

      My daf is a sign of warmer days to come! Not just yet, but soon. Thanks, Fatima.

  36. Colline's avatar Colline February 17, 2018 / 20:13

    My sentiments exactly when experiencing mid-winter!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 17, 2018 / 22:49

      I was beginning to think it was just me after reading some of the comments! Cheers Colline

  37. Tina Sequeira's avatar Tina Sequeira February 18, 2018 / 03:14

    Pretty interesting …the narrative and the metaphor to the grey demon. Love it! A great read as always 🙂 Looking forward to your next!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 18, 2018 / 16:12

      That’s very kind of you Tina.I’ll be absent from the next 2 FriFics as I am jetting off to the sunshine for some R&R!

  38. Dawn M. Miller's avatar Dawn M. Miller February 18, 2018 / 20:11

    Art imitating life here. Last night we had a few inches of snow, the temps rose and it’s gone now by afternoon. Just now someone posted a picture of a daffodil. Hope springs eternal.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 19, 2018 / 21:33

      That is in fact what normally happens here – never the way it looks in that photo! Cheers Dawn

  39. Sarah Ann's avatar Sarah Ann February 19, 2018 / 20:11

    Beautifully done – the cold blanket effect, and feelings of claustrophobia. The splash of daffodil yellow is indeed a welcome and warming sight.

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