Pretty Flamingo

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He still thinks about her. He still sees her, in his dreams.

She was young, she was pretty. 

He saw her here, he saw her there. He hoped she’d notice him, but she never did.

She had pink hair, and always wore a crimson dress. No matter how dull the day, how so-so the street, she’d add a little charm.

Someone wrote a fitting song. Pretty Famingo it was called.  He always wondered if it was meant for her.

Then she disappeared.

Even now, many years later, he sits on the bench in town, the bench he was sitting on the last time he saw her. 

Time hasn’t been kind to him. Sometimes he wonders if she’s no more than a figment of his imagination. That song still occupies his mind.  Is it playing tricks with him?

‘Some sweet day I’ll make you mine, pretty flamingo’, he mutters to himself, ‘cos paradise is where we’ll be’.

But for now he still thinks about her. He still sees her, in his dreams.

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Thanks to Sadje for hosting What Do You See?

22 thoughts on “Pretty Flamingo

  1. Dale's avatar Dale May 19, 2025 / 14:45

    One of those moments that sticks to you and takes over… Not always a healthy choice!

    Nicely written, Keith.

  2. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall May 19, 2025 / 15:45

    Oh wow, fabulous, Keith! The story and the song… big smile!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 20, 2025 / 16:52

      Thanks Chris, I remember buyng a vinyl record of that song back in the day!

  3. The Abject Muse's avatar The Abject Muse May 19, 2025 / 16:05

    Oh, I like this a lot! Very touching and heartfelt. Good, good, writing.

  4. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged May 19, 2025 / 16:18

    Love this, Keith. Obsession is quite like you describe.

  5. beth's avatar beth May 19, 2025 / 17:37

    aw that’s so bittersweet

  6. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough May 19, 2025 / 17:48

    Poignant, and sweetest as a memory. An old lady weighing 12 stone, wrinkled, using a cane, could walk by him today and he’d never recognize her — good thing. 😉

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 20, 2025 / 17:39

      He may look twice if she has pink hair, but I doubt he’d stop her!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 20, 2025 / 17:50

      I’m pleased they came together! Thanks so much, Yvette.

  7. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin May 19, 2025 / 19:29

    Beautiful and well written story, Keith Heartfelt longings well penned..

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 21, 2025 / 17:29

      Thanks so much, Nancy, it was perfect excuse to use one of my fave songs from a long ago!

  8. Sadje's avatar Sadje May 20, 2025 / 00:24

    Such a sweet and poignant story Keith. Thanks for joining in.

  9. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz May 20, 2025 / 15:17

    What a melancholy song of love. This was so tender and beautiful, Keith.

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