A short story …

… for #writephoto

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‘Lucky heather mister?’ said the gipsy as she held out a little sprig bound with a bow.  I took it, passed her a couple of coins and went on my way.

Later that day, as I sat pinching it between my fingers, I began to remember.  It was many moons ago.  Her name was Heather.

We met at a gig,  or was it a party?  Yes, a party.  She always wore something purple, a blouse or sometimes a scarf.  And I always called her my little bunch of heather!

We would take long slow walks together in the countryside.  Miles, we’d walk.  We didn’t say much.   We’d just listen to the sounds of nature.

We went our separate ways after a while,  though I don’t recall why.  It could have been when she went off to university.   Whatever it was, we lost touch.

Lucky heather the gipsy called it.  Some people probably believe in it!  It’s still over there on the table.  I wonder, shall I make a wish?  Why not.  I know, I’ll wish to hear from Heather again!

I’ll let you know if my wish comes true, but I’m not holding out much hope!

You have a wish too! Catch!

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dream Thanks to Sue Vincent for hosting.

37 thoughts on “A short story …

  1. Denise Hammond's avatar Denise Hammond July 3, 2020 / 18:07

    Oh my. That photo is lovely. Nice little story, too.

  2. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli July 3, 2020 / 18:46

    Such a tender, magical tale, Keith.

  3. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough July 3, 2020 / 20:08

    Delightful. I wish I could remember half the things I’ve forgotten. 😉

  4. HappySoul's avatar HappySoul July 3, 2020 / 20:12

    Beautiful tale ! 😊

  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje July 3, 2020 / 21:28

    I like this wistful story.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje July 4, 2020 / 12:58

        You’re welcome

  6. lisa thomson's avatar lisa thomson July 4, 2020 / 01:09

    This is very sweet. Loved the reminiscing in the story. Well done, Keith.
    I’m a little embarrassed because I thought it was lilac in the photo…and in my own poem mentioned the lilacs in bloom. oops.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 4, 2020 / 09:02

      Thanks so much lisa. Heather is a similar colour to lilac, so worry not! Sights such as that in the picture are a common sight in my part of the world, so I had no problem.

  7. willowdot21's avatar willowdot21 July 4, 2020 / 09:56

    Very nice story Keith, I still see a gypsy lady plying heather, occasionally now but they are still around.
    I wonder if she got in touch… It’s not always a good thing ..but it could be 😀💜

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 4, 2020 / 13:48

      I agree. Sometimes it’s best to treasure the memories and leave it there. Thanks so much.

      • willowdot21's avatar willowdot21 July 4, 2020 / 14:16

        A pleasure 💜

  8. earthskyair's avatar earthskyair July 4, 2020 / 11:29

    So nice! I love the way you carried me into your reverie/reminiscing. 🌷

  9. Nima Mohan's avatar Nima Mohan July 4, 2020 / 13:10

    Am happy to discover this side of you Keith.. So full of love you are here <3

      • Nima Mohan's avatar Nima Mohan July 4, 2020 / 14:54

        And am happy to see witness those sides Keith ! 💓

  10. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny July 4, 2020 / 13:33

    Very nice presentation, or perhaps remembrance, of Heather through the sprig of lucky heather.

  11. wallietheimp's avatar wallietheimp July 4, 2020 / 15:37

    Charming! Wallie and I hope the protagonist’s wish comes true!! 🙂

  12. michnavs's avatar michnavs July 4, 2020 / 18:26

    What a lovely tale keith and a brilliant take on the prompt.

  13. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings July 5, 2020 / 01:55

    My wish is always the same as my prayer, that all will know the love of G-d and of others.

  14. Shweta Suresh's avatar Shweta Suresh July 5, 2020 / 12:52

    Such a lovely tale. And I would love to have a bit of that lucky Heather. I wish it would be enough to wish away this pandemic.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 5, 2020 / 13:06

      If only it was! I regularly get offered lucky heather in the street, but I’ve never bought any. I wonder…

  15. Sue Vincent's avatar Sue Vincent July 5, 2020 / 18:11

    Lovely, Keith… I hope the heather brings luck 😉

  16. kittysverses's avatar kittysverses July 6, 2020 / 14:13

    This is such a lovely take on the prompt, Keith. Enjoyed every bit of it. 🙂

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