For Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.
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‘Tis you sir, as certain as ’tis day. I am not fooled by your guise, ‘twas you that set the fire this Autumn past.
Still, I bear the scars. Though smitten by your jagged rock, gagged and bound, I writhed free. However, I had not the means to quench the grislic flames that robbed me of my dwelling place, and my beloved family.
You imagined I would not discern you, did you not? How wrong you were. Now deplorable sir, the nethermost depths of your repugnant basket are reached. ‘Tis I who’ll strike the final blow; ’tis I.
Take this…..sir!
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Clicketh Froggie to visit the squares
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PHOTO PROMPT © Ken Arnopole (friend of Ted Strutz)
Keith's Ramblings 
Revenge tastes sweet. Great writing Keith
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It certainly does thank you, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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Zounds! A stirring piece, sirrah
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Thank you, most kindly!
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Ah retribution is a bitter pill and a heavy load for both parties. Well done Keith. A sombre reflective piece.
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It sure can be. Thanks so much, Suzette.
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You are welcome, Keith.
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Froggy’s getting riled up!
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He’s not to be messed with!
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Good one Keith!
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Thank you, Di!
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It’s so sad, revenge begets more revenge.
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It happens, unfortunately.
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never forgotten, revenge is gotten ! (made up a word here)
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You really are a wordsmith!
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)))
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busted – he did discern you and payback is a …..
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It was vengeance well deserved!
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🙂🙂
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Dear Keith,
In light of the circumstances I’d say he’s a gentleman. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Me too! Thanks, Rochelle.
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as always, great use of metaphor to prove a point. well done.
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Thanks for your kind words, plaridel!
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The Gods usually win. Good writing.
Tracey
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Indeed they do! Thanks, Tracey.
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Me thinks this was a bit of Shakespeare!
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Thee art v’ry kind, thanketh thee!
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Fire and brimstone are the order of the day.
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Very true, James!
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Oh yes!
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Like tea, can be served hot or cold, and it is always satisfying. Good one, Keith.
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Very true, thanks so much, Lisa!
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You are most welcome, Keith.
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And that, sir, is how it is done! With class and panache!
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Rather class than a kick up the…never mind. Thanks Dale!
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He he he… exactly.
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Not your usual light-hearted fare! I was so surprised by the serious tone of this that I had to read it twice to get the whole picture. Well done, Keith.
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I had to rewrite it several times to get it to make sense! Thanks, Linda.
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Having lost everything, the culprit may be happy to finally escape the clutches of his conscience (if he has any!)
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That’s true! Thanks for dropping by, Dahlia.
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ah, this surely zinged!
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Caught! Revenge is complete
Well done Keith. Love the language in this one.
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Well penned, sir! Take that! I agree with Laurie, I love the language.
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…..and that and that and that! You are reprehensible and now you will pay dearly for the agony you have inflicted upon me and…..
Oh, sorry! I got carried away by your amazing story. Very well done, dear Keith!
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