22 thoughts on “She’s silent now”

  1. Misky's avatar Misky Aug 18, 2024 / 12:02

    I like how the lack of detail lets one’s imagination fill in the gaps.

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  3. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb Aug 18, 2024 / 17:12

    Hi Keith – dark indeed … reverberating for ever … cheers Hilary

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    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings Aug 18, 2024 / 17:35

      Hello Hilary! I imagine Eastbourne’s been reverberating a bit during the last few days!

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      • hilarymb's avatar hilarymb Aug 18, 2024 / 17:46

        Yup – I was going to include that thought … we’ve had a few sessions … I think it’s probably over now! I saw the Red Arrows on Thursday … they’ve gone to Canada now … not sure how they get there … fly???!!!! Cheers – lots of people here too! Take care – Hilary

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      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings Aug 18, 2024 / 18:00

        It’s the first time for years I’ve not been. I see lots of them flying over Bexhill on their way to the show and back.

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  5. alohagmb13's avatar alohagmb13 Aug 18, 2024 / 21:10

    Your “Edgar Allen Poe” side is showing, Keith. Excellent tale.

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  11. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin Aug 20, 2024 / 22:09

    Oh, what a cliffhanger in the literary sense of the word…Well done Keith!. You have told a gripping tale with very little details…most excellent. The true definition of a story for the readers imagination to fill in the blanks___!

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  12. Dale's avatar Dale Aug 21, 2024 / 01:37

    Yes, but what, in effect, did he offer her? Mayhaps she rather spend herself rather than succumb.

    You do have a dark side under all that humour!

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