Twenty nine words – Keith's Ramblings

Twenty nine words

Mar 13, 2021Mar 13, 2021Keith's Ramblings

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Vista and the limit, 29 words.

grinched.regular

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I rested atop the hill (puff-puff)

It was breathtaking (the climb, that is)

A far-reaching vista surrounded me. 347 degrees (a bush blocked out 13) of sheer unadulterated …

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… ugliness.

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Sadje Mar 13, 2021 / 14:15

Haha! Good one 😂

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- Keith's Ramblings Mar 14, 2021 / 10:58
  
  Pleased you liked it Sadje!
  
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  - Sadje Mar 14, 2021 / 11:47
    
    👍👍👍
    
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Christine Goodnough Mar 13, 2021 / 14:39

Sounds like someone needs to plant more bushes up there. 🙂

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- Keith's Ramblings Mar 14, 2021 / 10:58
  
  Not a bad idea Christine!
  
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Dale Mar 13, 2021 / 15:01

Hah! That sucks… You want to be rewarded for such efforts!

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- Keith's Ramblings Mar 14, 2021 / 10:59
  
  Oh yes! Cheers Dale.
  
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  - Dale Mar 14, 2021 / 14:07
    
    Cheers Keith!
    
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Susan St.Pierre Mar 13, 2021 / 15:04

A clever write. Made me chuckle!

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- Keith's Ramblings Mar 14, 2021 / 11:00
  
  I’m pleased! Thanks, Susan.
  
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hilarymb Mar 13, 2021 / 15:13

Excellent Keith – very accurate to today’s prompt … too familiar I fear … perhaps we need a Lowry around to show us its beauty … I’d run down quickly if I was you – mighty chilly wind out there! cheers Hilary

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- Keith's Ramblings Mar 14, 2021 / 11:03
  
  I wonder what he’d make of it! It’s mighty windy up there too! thanks, Hilary.
  
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Ramya Vivek Mar 13, 2021 / 16:07

Oh my! What a twist!

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- Keith's Ramblings Mar 14, 2021 / 11:04
  
  Yep! Thanks, Ramya.
  
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jenne49 Mar 13, 2021 / 17:10

So cleverly done. And the perfect anticlimax!

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- Keith's Ramblings Mar 14, 2021 / 11:05
  
  That’s kind of you Jenne, thanks.
  
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Iain Kelly Mar 13, 2021 / 17:31

Ha, love that missing 13 degrees 🙂

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- Keith's Ramblings Mar 14, 2021 / 11:08
  
  Shame it wasn’t more! Cheers Iain.
  
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Na'ama Yehuda Mar 13, 2021 / 19:29

Well, it is all in the name of research, science, and fact-finding. … 😉 Thank you for your sacrifice … 😀

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- Keith's Ramblings Mar 14, 2021 / 11:11
  
  Oh yes, this day will go down in history! Cheers Na’ama.
  
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  - Na'ama Yehuda Mar 14, 2021 / 15:47
    
    LOL 🙂
    
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messymimi's meanderings Mar 14, 2021 / 02:07

Sometimes you climb the wrong hill!

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- Keith's Ramblings Mar 14, 2021 / 11:27
  
  We’ve all done that Mimi!
  
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rochellewisoff Mar 15, 2021 / 00:21

Dear Keith,

There’s breathtaking and then there’s breathtaking. Well done.

Shalom,

Rochelle

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- rochellewisoff Mar 15, 2021 / 00:22
  
  Mine’s here https://rochellewisoff.com/2021/03/14/weekend-writing-prompt-vista/
  
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  - Keith's Ramblings Mar 15, 2021 / 10:15
    
    Yes, it’s one of those words! Thanks, Rochelle.
    
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